The Nun and The Racecar

Written: May 13, 2024 For: Palindrome Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ At noon, the civic-level racecar, was deified by the crowd from afar but a kayak deed, made the crowd did heed, as they monitor a rotator star! the nun with bird rib in her hand, At noon she worries of grim land But the tenet she knew Was always to bib true, And refer to the drab as grand!
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Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 10:39 PM
Way to go, Sotto. Congrats
May Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Very nicely done Sotto, Congrats on your win
Beaufort Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 2:42 PM
SP, you have very advanced story telling quality and you know interesting word uses. I'm seeing, for example, that to bib means to drink. I think I could just study your work and increase my vocabulary tremendously. You are really making me smile and chuckle! I'm thinking a kayak deed is some kind of crazy driving maneuver, but I can't find the reference for that.
Proxenos Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 9:29 AM
Hi Lasaad, A laugh a line i had with this, Such Poetic humor, oh what bliss! i loved the stanza/limerick with the nun. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer
Cunningham Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 10:44 AM
You rose well to the challenge Lassaad, a perfect palindrome limerick, good luck in the contest. Tom
Narain Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Great limericks. Funny and interesting. GL in contest.
Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 6:33 AM
Interesting work. I am wondering now where that bird rib came from. LOL..Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Vaso Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 12:13 AM
Sure made me smile!
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