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The Not There

Negative space forlorn. Shapeless hidden no form, bracketed box born. Lingering message torn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/6/2009 8:04:00 AM
I see the hunchback of Notre Dame, the alterr ego for the great design of a non-chaotic universe. Love
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Date: 2/27/2009 11:46:00 AM
Excellent and clever monorhyme! I love the title. Me thinks there is something deeper in the nothing! Thank you for all you support and encouragement, my friend! Love and hugs, Robin
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Date: 2/27/2009 8:40:00 AM
Well done, Deborah! I haven't seen this form, but will have to give it a try sometime! :) You did it proud! ~ Carrie
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