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The Not So Friendly Mirror

Form.     Florette 2.   Wrote for contest but didnt submit. (I chickened out)


Mirrors reveal what you can't hide
The rolls of fat your large backside
The legs once slim now plump and veined
The face once smooth now lines remain.
Yet dimples showing that you are smiling inside.

Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2014

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Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/16/2014 7:35:00 PM Doing some catch up tonight are you? Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/18/2014 3:07:00 AM Sort of lol...Seren

Arthur Vaso Date: 9/26/2014 11:44:00 PM beat you too it LOL see "The Mirror" Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/25/2014 8:30:00 PM sweet win...PD Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/16/2014 6:40:00 PM thank you

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/25/2014 8:03:00 AM CONGRATULATION on your win, Seren. Lots of Love. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/16/2014 6:40:00 PM thank you Maurice ....Seren

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/25/2014 8:01:00 AM Just read the comments to know its ur birthday! Hv a great day dear! Happy birthday to you .... the song for u! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 10/16/2014 6:41:00 PM thank you Dr Upma....Seren

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/25/2014 8:00:00 AM Sweet write Seren! Congrats on fine win! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/24/2014 5:15:00 PM I LOVE your poem, Seren. My mirror poem was on the same topic and I am glad i submitted it! Congrats for hm. Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 9/24/2014 3:27:00 PM Congrats Seren on the placement...I like your other fantasy better...hugs Tim Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 9/24/2014 11:15:00 AM Congratulations on your HM Seren Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/23/2014 4:55:00 PM It has just occurred to me. That's probably why entry did so poorly. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/23/2014 10:23:00 PM Your a ninny Maurice .....so funny ...Seren

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/23/2014 4:53:00 PM Oh by the way you forgot to mention this was a fantasy write. We all know poems don't work if you write "I looked in the Mirror. Perfect! The End." Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/23/2014 10:22:00 PM I hoped they realised it was a fantasy write....are wellSeren

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/23/2014 4:48:00 PM I wished I had chickened out. I won zero, nothing, zilch, nada, nil, zip, shut out, a big goose egg. Great poem I think it would of done well. Did I mention how my contest entry did? Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/23/2014 10:21:00 PM Lol Maurice, aww what a shame ....do better next time .rofl...Seren

Ma Yaseen Date: 9/21/2014 3:50:00 AM a nice poem Seren.. keep going Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/23/2014 10:24:00 PM Hi Maliki thx for stopping by......Seren

Vera Duggan Date: 9/20/2014 7:17:00 PM Very good Florette Serene, I hate looking in the mirror but what you see is you and only you and as Peter said it is what is in your heart that counts, excellent piece. Take care...............Vera.............. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/20/2014 11:28:00 PM Hi Vera, yes that's true, it is you that reflects back. Luckily so far the reflection is ok, when and if I catch up to the rhyme, I will accept it as being me....thanks for stopping by ....Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/20/2014 8:19:00 AM A perfect take on the form Florette. nice rhyming. I just finished a haiku on mirror as a metaphor, Seren Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/20/2014 8:20:00 AM Thanks Ram will check yours out now....Seren

Jerry T Curtis Date: 9/19/2014 9:42:00 PM I have a feeling you could have continued on with this, but I'm some how glad you didn't--nice write, lol Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/19/2014 9:58:00 PM I am laughing, yes possibly I could have, was thinking of all the worst case scenarios, think if it was me would cover all mirrors. Lol....thanks for stopping by.....Seren