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The Not-So-Early Bird

I saw a robin catch a worm Then put it down to watch it squirm. This action was repeated ‘til I guess he’d finally had his fill. With worm held tight, he hopped away, His breakfast snagged, to start his day. Perhaps he was the early bird To which the adage has referred. Yet when I witnessed this, the sun Was past the point when day’s begun And I was even slightly late, So “early’s” open to debate. Though still, the bird and I both did Our morning chore outside, amid The quiet of the city streets, With exercise and tasty treats.

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Date: 5/26/2025 4:56:00 PM
What I wonder about you is whether your poetry collection will one day in the future gain fame. Has anyone before you written an entertaining rhyming memoir? It would be easy to get your autograph now.
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Date: 5/25/2025 4:12:00 AM
What a delight to spend the morning inside your poem. Never realized they toy w/ prey like cats do, enjoy the squirming. Always a pleasure to read you ... CayCay
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/25/2025 1:54:00 PM
Thank you for all your lovely comments, Cay Cay! Much appreciated…
Date: 5/24/2025 8:19:00 PM
This was a Bird Brunch! Its like the "early-bird" breakfast, but at the brunch you get to play with your food ;)
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Date: 5/24/2025 2:28:00 PM
Early, Bird... Is When You Begin! Only The Date Becomes Late.
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