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March- 14- 2025
Write Five Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France


 

“The sky in changing shades enfolds many mysteries of the universe, the shifting clouds, the sun, moon, stars and other heavenly bodies. Its vastness is like the vastness of human mind, shape shifting every now and then, but capable of changing the amorphous into fascinating shapes.” ~ By Poet
In the noon sky, wade the truant clouds. With the sweep of wind, how they form, Into configurations of varied shape and size! Giants, mountains and bundles of fluffy wool To be woven into yet a hundred patterns.

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Date: 3/21/2025 3:00:00 PM
Creative winning work. I am glad that I chose it to read today. Congratulations on it being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 3/18/2025 10:31:00 AM
Wonderful imagery.. your words brought your mind into play here by painting such a vivid image... You are right about the clouds, always forming into different shapes...
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Date: 3/16/2025 10:41:00 AM
Beautiful quote and the poem.
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Date: 3/16/2025 8:00:00 AM
Beautiful flowing words and fascinating metaphors create five outstanding stanzas revealing the birth of a cloud studded sky. A fine win.
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Date: 3/16/2025 5:38:00 AM
Yes, indeed; the patterns are in us...we cannot see and form, what we do not recognize as real substance -- sort of like, we look outside of ourselves, to find the deepness of our own universe. Lovely read. Very profound!
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Date: 3/15/2025 1:13:00 PM
Those are five wonderful lines, Valsa. The quote and poem are exquisite. Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 3/15/2025 11:43:00 AM
Well written on your winning entry, Valsa.
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Date: 3/15/2025 10:07:00 AM
The ever changing sky is fascinating, and your lovely five lines describe that perfectly. Congratulations Valsa on your win in Constance’s contest… Beryl
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Date: 3/15/2025 6:28:00 AM
I indeed enjoyed your winning write Valsa and the beautiful images it created in my mind! Happy Saturday xxoo
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Date: 3/15/2025 2:42:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Valsa :) - hugs
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Date: 3/15/2025 2:30:00 AM
loved your noon sky! congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/14/2025 11:36:00 PM
Hearty congratulations again friend on your top win in this poetry contest with a shining poem , revealing your poetic craft and stunning imagery. Wish you a pleasant weekend.
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Date: 3/14/2025 1:56:00 PM
I love a blue sky with puffy white clouds. I suppose we all do. Keep writing the good stuff Valsa
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Date: 3/14/2025 12:21:00 PM
- Beautiful, Valsa...here you get two for one :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 3/14/2025 11:13:00 AM
Love watching the clouds and see the images they create, pareidola they call it Best of luck Valsa and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 3/14/2025 11:11:00 AM
Dear Valsa, your imagery and metaphoric allusions are impeccable. Best for a win.
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Date: 3/14/2025 10:28:00 AM
Your intro is as beautiful as your five lines. I enjoyed your well-crafted imagery and saw the clouds in my mind's eye. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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