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March- 14- 2025
Write Five Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest
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The Noon Sky

“The sky in changing shades enfolds many mysteries of the universe, the shifting clouds, the sun, moon, stars and other heavenly bodies. Its vastness is like the vastness of human mind, shape shifting every now and then, but capable of changing the amorphous into fascinating shapes.” ~ By Poet


In the noon sky, wade the truant clouds. With the sweep of wind, how they form, Into configurations of varied shape and size! Giants, mountains and bundles of fluffy wool To be woven into yet a hundred patterns.
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Kendrick Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 3:00 PM
Creative winning work. I am glad that I chose it to read today. Congratulations on it being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K
One Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 10:31 AM
Wonderful imagery.. your words brought your mind into play here by painting such a vivid image... You are right about the clouds, always forming into different shapes...
Narain Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 10:41 AM
Beautiful quote and the poem.
Greenhough Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 8:00 AM
Beautiful flowing words and fascinating metaphors create five outstanding stanzas revealing the birth of a cloud studded sky. A fine win.
DiMino Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 5:38 AM
Yes, indeed; the patterns are in us...we cannot see and form, what we do not recognize as real substance -- sort of like, we look outside of ourselves, to find the deepness of our own universe. Lovely read. Very profound!
Poet Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 1:13 PM
Those are five wonderful lines, Valsa. The quote and poem are exquisite. Congratulations on your top win.
Lane Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 11:43 AM
Well written on your winning entry, Valsa.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 10:07 AM
The ever changing sky is fascinating, and your lovely five lines describe that perfectly. Congratulations Valsa on your win in Constance’s contest… Beryl
Gentile Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 6:28 AM
I indeed enjoyed your winning write Valsa and the beautiful images it created in my mind! Happy Saturday xxoo
Andresen Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 2:42 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Valsa :) - hugs
mysore Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 2:30 AM
loved your noon sky! congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
Guptar Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 11:36 PM
Hearty congratulations again friend on your top win in this poetry contest with a shining poem , revealing your poetic craft and stunning imagery. Wish you a pleasant weekend.
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 12:21 PM
- Beautiful, Valsa...here you get two for one :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 11:13 AM
Love watching the clouds and see the images they create, pareidola they call it Best of luck Valsa and enjoy your weekend. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 11:11 AM
Dear Valsa, your imagery and metaphoric allusions are impeccable. Best for a win.
Godwin Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 10:28 AM
Your intro is as beautiful as your five lines. I enjoyed your well-crafted imagery and saw the clouds in my mind's eye. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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