The Non-Miracle.... Love

So many volcanoes,
spawn of Kraken’s seed,
boiling, roiling, seething, bubbling
inside thin walls traveling 
on a neural microcosm
of flesh transcending nothingness.
Who made you what your are?
Did you not reach your goal?
Did you not become the “yourself” you like?
Do you only live a cyber life?   
Painting your life, your brain, your body, in pseudo humanism?
No wonder you frustrate easily.
No wonder you don’t know the real you.
No wonder the fishing for compliments on demand like a movie. 
You made you whom you are.
Only you can change whom you are.
Openly sly cutting sweetness in public eye
cutting, personal innuendo excavating thrill.
Laying your arrogance at the feet of the public’s scrutiny
while the real you in domineering reverie lays fire and brimstone
stinging the soul of trust behind the veil of friendship.  
No wonder, one is warped!
No wonder, one knows not how to feel!
No wonder, one does not feel love, 
but has mixed emotion!
Not recognizing lust from love.
Not knowing when hate invades happiness.
To be humane is to trust 
until you find reason not to.
To be humane is to have faith that
the trust will be returned in kind.
To be humane is to live face to face.
You learn to love face to face.
And when you are alone.... memories. 
No matter the “whatever” of the baby or the mother,
the baby comes into the world with no hate, no lust.
It comes into the world physically and emotionally attached,
but more strongly emotionally.
If it is loved and nourished in relationship, love will grow.
Love will never die even long after the mother is gone.  
Some parents treat their children as rental cars
and then wonder why they never come back home.
Some treat their spouse as nothing and cry when they part.
Yet some are too busy LOVING to hate.
Quarrel, yes!  Disagree, yes!, At times HATE, yes!  
Some times passion, some lust, but at ALL times LOVE!
True emotion never comes by correspondence course.
It comes face to face, sooner or later
weak or strong, but lasting even
when hidden away
in the pulsing
miracle we call
our heart.

© Aug 25 2010 For Farah's "Word Hurl" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/28/2010 11:43:00 AM
good write
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Date: 8/26/2010 5:56:00 AM
very strong! you covered the bases well. Oh I corrected that poem for the contest. Have a nice time judging!
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Date: 8/25/2010 6:59:00 PM
Very interesting and creative write on, Charles. I enjoyed it. Children as rental cars, spouse as nothing and some loving to hate. Wonderful expressions.
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Date: 8/25/2010 4:19:00 PM
Bravo, Charles. This is cool, the naught of naught, conceived of the derivative mind's carnal concept, apart from origin of the moral precept. Has no real power, except by counterfeiting Love's power; this by deception of trusting human souls.. Exceptional write. Bravo! Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/25/2010 2:32:00 PM
Wow! Charles, you gave a clear picture of the type of person with whom I don't want to associate. Those who are always fishing for compliments and acting pseudo-sweet in public. You have covered the full range of emotions in this powerful write and I wish you success in Farah's contest! Love, Carolyn
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