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The Nokken

Beware the white horse of norwegian lore. His power rippling through muscles, his white mane, dancing in the air like a ballerina on a string. Mount him, I say! Mount him! And hold your breath as you both plunge into the depths. A handsome young man, hear him play! Magic springing off his bow. Luring the people to a dance. That ends in their death. To learn of his ways, is a dare of its own. For the price you must pay, may be your soul. Take a gander at that log, the water lily, the boat. Do not be fooled, for he is a master of disguises. Stand upon the log and you shall fall. Pick the flower and you shall drown. Board the boat and you shall sink. Beware the white horse of Norwegian lore, The log that lies in wait. The beautiful lily. The abandoned boat. And the alluring fiddle you hear in the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/26/2015 12:49:00 AM
i honestly dont know if lyric man, skat, and poet destroyer are bots or what haha. do they comment on everyones poems? this beats beowulf by a long shot. I actually enjoyed reading it. gotta work on my man skills cuz this guy is the shit
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Kayleen Ashwood
Date: 3/26/2015 12:53:00 AM
No idea, I wouldn't be surprised though and thank you! Though I have no idea who beowulf is...
Date: 3/24/2015 1:38:00 AM
Nice poem!
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Date: 3/21/2015 4:12:00 PM
Kayleen, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/20/2015 12:19:00 PM
Kayleen, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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