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The Nocturnal Delight of Mephistopheles - Part One

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Author's Notes:  This rather dark poem is another one of my ongoing contributions to "Halloween 2014."  I am dedicating this poem personally to "Cheryl Anna Dunn," who is my great poet colleague and friend, and a fellow aficionado of The Black Arts.  And I call her:  "Fangoria - Queen of Darkness," because of the sheer volume and extent of dark topics and grim tales that she has marvelously woven into fascinating poetic verse.  Bravo to You!! -- Cheri!!  (Gary Bateman, October 11, 2014) (Narrative poetic format) 

Categories:  allegory, dark, evil, fantasy, halloween, horror, magic.

One dark, dreary night while working on a poem of hellish, hideous and Horrible fright, I became at once quite so fatigued and could barely keep My eyelids open anymore, and then suddenly darkness came masking my Psyche in a Most eerie dark night, only to find when awakening a sinister, Dark presence lurking at my chamber door. I thought I was dreaming with the furtive appearance of this dark visage Before me, when suddenly he began to speak slowly, to mesmerize me Whole with his fiery eyes. As this dark visage spoke to me, I sensed an awful Aura of macabre right before me, but my senses were paralyzed not by fear, But a curiosity of this man with his fiery eyes. On my inquiry I found to my shock and surprise this man was the evil “Mephistopheles,” in spirit and body now whole, who was here to quench His rapturous desire in fulfilling his “nocturnal delight,” the essence of his Lurking presence now in my chamber room. Mephisto was indeed a demon Devil who served Lucifer with a most passionate delight. I couldn’t believe my very ears, evil Mephisto standing before me with his Fiery eyes of fright, beckoning me toward a world of death, demons, deception, And debauchery. I told him that I knew of his fate with Faust, and he replied, With his smiling delight: “Faust was only fiction—Goethe’s imagination, And I’m quite real to you and most unholy.” With Mephisto’s revelation to me, I began to quake, shudder with a most pure Fear, for I knew this dream was not a dream, but a nightmare taunting my very Soul. Thinking fast, I asked: “But why am I here in your presence tonight?” Mephisto replied, “This is the night of my nocturnal delight, for I’ve come for Your soul.” With this, I asked pray tell, “Why me, Sir?” “I’m only a struggling young poet.” “Why my soul of all things, Sir?” “I’m still learning my craft and mastering my Works. To this Mephisto replied, “My Master loves the vim and vigor of your Works young poet.” “He admires your passion to learn the Black Arts and to put Dark evil ideas in your poetry.” His direct reply and intention plunged my spirit into a dark whirlwind and vortex Of the vilest evil. I told Mephisto that I did not consciously summon him on this Most dark of night. He replied: “Your concerns matter not to me young poet, for In time you’ll become most evil.” “And, I’m here now to make you a most Wonderful offer, one that you shan’t refuse tonight.” How did this situation move so fast from whence Mephisto graced his presence At my door? My mind now was racing in overdrive and overwrought with images Of death, evil, and fear. I had little time left before Mephisto acted to doom my Soul making me both a tragic and poor figure. “What do I do?” I pondered as These events tortured my inner being leaving me in panic, despair, and utter fear. END OF PART ONE - THE NOCTURNAL DELIGHT OF MEPHISTOPHELES Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, Schoeningen, Germany (October 11, 2014) (Narrative poetic format)

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Date: 10/13/2014 11:49:00 AM
Breath taking...off to read part 2.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/13/2014 11:54:00 AM
Maurice, Thanks for your read and review here. Remember that Halloween is approaching and I'm just trying to scare you with my ghoulish writing!! (HA! HA!) Do check out my mega-eight section Rosalia Black Witch epic poem posted to PS in September. I'm hopeful about getting that one separately published in the future. Best Wishes My Friend . . . Gary
Date: 10/13/2014 5:21:00 AM
Mein guter freund ich habe gesagt das you are going to be the High Priest if you continue like that! Ha-ha! You are the Goethe of Halloween! Excellent so far and a seven!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/13/2014 11:25:00 AM
Mein guter Freund Demetrios, Hab' keine Angst!! I, of course, know it's a joke -- but it is indeed much fun to kid around. High Priest and The Goethe of Halloween are okay. But the Master, Herr von Goethe has his "Mephistopheles"!! Thanks too for your compliment. I do try to write my very best always. Cheers!! Gary
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/13/2014 10:16:00 AM
Mein freund, Garry, I hope you do not take seriously my jock about becoming "Mephistopheles's High Priest! " God forbid my friend I just pull your Leg! The other title though I mean it, for you write with such authority and expertise!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/13/2014 8:48:00 AM
Hello Demetrios!! Ich bedanke mich sehr fuer Ihren Kommentar ueber meinen schwarzen Freund "Mephistopheles." I accept the titles of "High Priest" and "The Goethe of Halloween." I must tell my wife Ingrid. She's German and she knows "Goethe's Faust" very well. I don't want to make Johann Wolfgang von Goethe jealous. His spirit might protest!! Cheers!! Gary
Date: 10/12/2014 4:56:00 PM
This is a stunning work my friend! Solid 7 and now going to read its companion piece .. Fabulous work indeed!!!!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/13/2014 8:23:00 AM
Robert, Thanks so much my friend for your continued reads and Ditto from me too about your poems. I will be releasing a Shakespearean Sonnet soon called "Your Kiss." I was working on it last night when I reviewed your really great piece on the "Gates of Hell." Please take a look at my "Rosalia Epic Witch Poem," posted in 8 sections in Sept. I treasure your reviews!! Best Always, Gary
Date: 10/12/2014 1:06:00 PM
excellent piece of writing smiling pal oh by the way i posted eden truly you done a masterful job brush stroking it beautiful really shines look forward to doing another mad one for the fairy tale collection lol thumbs up
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/12/2014 2:55:00 PM
Liam . . . Thanks again for the read. My pleasure Sir with the "Eden" poem!! Cheers, Gary

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