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The Night Sky

As the sun is getting ready to go to bed, where will it lay it's head. The light will now shed, for darkness needs to spread. The pretty night sky, makes me want to cry. Can you hear the full moon, is it playing a love tune. The twinkling far off stars, I wonder if they really go to mars. The stars look like diamonds across the many acres, could their beauty be for matchmakers. For the beauty one cannot buy, it will make me want to just sigh. 2/25/2022 2 place The Night Sky Contest Judged: 4/30/2022 Sponsored by: Anna Marie Kaianah

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/6/2022 10:04:00 AM

Paula, congratulations on your win! The beauty of the night sky really does make the heart sigh! Just delightful my friend. Blessings for your day!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/8/2022 12:20:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win with my "The Night Sky." Glad you like this write. I love the night sky and all of it's beauty. Have a great/blessed~day/week................

Greg Gaul

Date: 5/4/2022 4:42:00 PM

Clever rhyming that ends in an enigmatic sigh quite appropriately. Well done.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/8/2022 12:18:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win with my "The Night Sky." Glad you enjoyed this one. Have a great/blessed~day/week................

Len Gasun

Date: 5/2/2022 9:33:00 PM

Wow! I love the enchanting imagery of the night sky in your beautiful poem my dear friend Paula. Big CONGRATS on your win! Thank you so much for sharing. I love it and enjoyed. Have a great day my dearest friend. God Bless. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/8/2022 12:17:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win with my "The Night Sky." Glad you love this one. Have a great/blessed~day/week........................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/1/2022 6:53:00 AM

"the beauty one cannot buy" - Great. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/8/2022 12:15:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win with my "The Night Sky." Glad you like this one. So true, you cannot buy it. It is worth millionssss. Have a great/blessed~day/week........................

Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 5/1/2022 12:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Paula! A very lovely poem. <3 ~Anna Kaianah

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/8/2022 12:14:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win with my "The Night Sky." Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed~day/week................................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/28/2022 11:19:00 AM

The serenity and bliss of nighttime is captured in the this poem's beautiful words.Thank you for sharing, Paula. Blessings

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2022 5:26:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this write. I love the beauty of the night sky/stars. Have a great/blessed day................................

Michael Tor

Date: 2/27/2022 7:27:00 PM

Your words Paula create wonderful imagery, love how you wrote this piece, very creative. God bless you...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/28/2022 8:03:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your kind words. Glad you like my Night Sky write. I love the beauty of the night sky filled with the diamonds/stars. Have a great/blessed day.............

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 2/27/2022 7:25:00 AM

Dear Paula, you have painted a beautiful picture of night sky with stunning images. A night sky with blinking stars often render peace and tranquility. Love and blessings ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/27/2022 8:57:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my write. I love the night sky with the diamonds in the sky. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend.............

Valsa George

Date: 2/25/2022 7:49:00 PM

A beautiful view of the night sky, you have presented, Paula ! When emotions of joy overwhelm our heart, sometimes we will feel like crying ! Blessings and Love!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2022 7:48:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my view of the sky write. Yes, somethings the beauty of the night sky makes one want to cry. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend.............

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/25/2022 2:34:00 PM

Paula, I enjoyed your poem, you painted a lovely picture. "Sun is getting ready to go to bed, where will it lay it's head."... I like that line. Blessings ~ Debra

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2022 7:42:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend.............

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/25/2022 12:10:00 PM

Some things cannot be purchased, only appreciated with the naked eye and heart. Thank you for sharing such a view Paula. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2022 7:42:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, somethings are priceless like the night sky. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend.............

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/25/2022 10:54:00 AM

Great imagery, imagination and a reminder there is peace in the night sky. :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2022 7:33:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this sky write. Yes, there is peace in the night sky. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend.............

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/25/2022 10:25:00 AM

I can see it all, just as you wrote it. Well done Paula. Beautiful. I like how you added the emotions with it :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/26/2022 7:32:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you can see my "The Night Sky" write. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend.............