The Night Market

If you wait until the sun goes down,
a thousand suns will rise.
Artificial, bright, igniting
tangled clouds in smoggy skies,
and flooding dingy streets
with fluorescent streams of light
that carry waves of people,
cresting, crashing, clashing 
across mismatched sidewalks.
They speak in foreign tongues
that lick like wild flames
and burn with glowing strangeness
as cockroaches skulk and scurry
beneath makeshift stands
where pairs of busy hands
prepare the strangest foods,
from skewered squid and snakes
to crepes and pineapple cakes,
cubes of deep-fried tofu
and the freshest dragon fruit.
Watch them badger, hear them barter
over onyx rings and jade bangles
beside rose quartz beads that dangle
from scratched display cases.
The market throbs with energy,
a living entity that swallows me.
And when I think I've lost myself,
I focus on that giddy sound,
the universal language
that transcends all others.
They laugh, and I smile.

*Based on a night market I visited in Taiwan last year
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
July 13, 2013 at 8:22 AM
I really enjoyed retreading this one, it truly is magical,
A   Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 9:50 PM
Heather, Congratulations with your awesome winning free verse poem... xox~ LINDA
Horstkotter Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 7:18 PM
Great piece. I can see the market in my head as i read this piece. Must have been great to be there and witness it in person. Enjoyed the read.
Puddifoot Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:44 PM
this is so tangible and vivid and really immerses the reader in the sights, sounds and smells of this bustling night market, I like the rhyme sprinkled throughout the poem...it's hard to believe you only started writing poetry a year ago as you're such an accomplished poet - congrats on your win (I would've placed it much higher) :)
Omara Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 8:08 PM
You make it a very colourful, interesting and exciting place, Heather. Congratulations on your win.-Red
Long Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:54 PM
congrats on your win in the contest. take care cory
Morrison Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:44 PM
Well written piece! Kim
Guzzi Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:33 PM
So colorful and full of lovely alliteration which makes such nice mouth music..Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Posey Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 2:44 PM
A word creation worthy of an episode of "Bizarre Foods".... Well written and delicious to many senses.... Really nice going.... Jake
Lamoureux Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 8:42 AM
Just dropping by to say hello. I enjoyed reading this one again.
O'Leary Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 7:26 AM
Fantastic description, Heather... simply wonderful... Terry
Onclaud Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 12:28 PM
i like the energy of this piece... vivid and full of life... wondefully scribed!..:) huggs
Badmus Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 7:54 AM
it is a straight forward and interesting poem with lots of elaboration of its theme."they laughed and I smiled"good work here,keep it up.
Jad Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 4:56 PM
You have moved the streets with all of its lights and liveliness into words.. I enjoyed reading you!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 8:01 AM
I have never been to Asia but this is how I imagine the markets. Great visuals you made me smell and see the sights.
Uche Ken Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Good one from you. Please don't stop at visiting a night market in Taiwan, endeavor to see one here in Africa. You will be amazed and I promise to be your tour guide. Thanks
Richards Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 7:07 PM
I feel as if I am there.......hearing the noise, the people, the smells of food and sweat, the exchange of money and laughter, and hustle and bustle. What an experience ...you have taken us with you!
Lawrence Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 5:07 PM
Reminds me of Pike Place Market here in Seattle. Love the descriptions.
A A Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 1:24 PM
This remind me of China town in NY city at night. Going at night is one of the best experiences I had. Thank you for taking me back there with you beautiful words.
Hunter Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 10:50 AM
My fave part...foreign tongues that lick like wild flames...
Hunter Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 10:47 AM
Very cool, Heather. This reminds me of a night market I used to visit on Temple Street in Hong Kong. I imagine they are very similar. So how many of the foods did you try?...I drank a glass of snake blood at the market once...and you are right, laughter is the universal language. Excellent as always...
Anglesey Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 9:52 AM
You are an infinite master of the poetic arts. Spectacular!
De Burca Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 9:39 AM
This is the second of your poems I have read today and again I find it wonderful. You have captured everything so well, I can almost smell the spices. I love the opening line, it sets the tone and captures the reader's imagination straight away. Excellent.
Tacito Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 8:19 AM
It's incredible what we discover when we leave our comfort zone and dive into new lands. How cool this sounds! Minus the cockroaches...NO THANKS! :) Nicely written!
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