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The Night Is Cold

The night is cold For my old bones So hold me tight

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Kash Poet

Date: 11/13/2011 7:43:00 AM

So cool!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/9/2011 12:47:00 PM

AWESOME, Jack! I think I've just read a first-place poem. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carolyn

John Smith

Date: 11/8/2011 1:47:00 PM

It's beauty is it's simplicity. RS is right. It's perfect.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/8/2011 12:39:00 PM

Perfect!! This is a perfect Than-Bauk! I don't believe I have read a better one in all my life!! Great word choices for the rhyming sections!! I know it's simple, but that's what makes it perfect!! Incredible job!!