The Night I Died

The night I died 
 I was not asleep, this was not a nightmare
my eyes were open as I struggled to wake up 
from the deep hole of sleep.
 I had sunk into a sinkhole of sleep
that could only end in unconsciousness drifting into death
helpless as an autumnal leaf falling off an oak.
With all my might with every fibre of my aged body
I heaved myself to the surface.
I landed on the wooden floor 
tried to get my breathing under control
My wife came running, asked what happened?
Nothing dear, nothing at all.
I was looking for a coin that fell out of my pocket
when undressing.
My head was still fuzzy by unwanted sleep.
I had died, but it was untimely 
my heroic leap out of bed had saved me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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July 16, 2021 at 5:40 AM
Sometimes when God is trying to reach you to show you something in your sleep. Sometimes it could feel just like that. if it happens again, remove all fear of death.
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July 16, 2021 at 2:38 AM
helpless as an autumnal leaf falling off an oak. Beautiful.
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