The Night

Mr. Pickles went to ease his marital
tensions in a bar, visible with neon lights-
unfortunately he had left his wallet home.

After drinking his night away, he starts a fight,
to help himself out of the bar without any pay
to the bartender.

Drunk and dizzy, he finds himself lying on a smooth,
glittering surface, surrounded by light.

“Oh, God, thank you for taking me!” Mr. Pickles shouts 
with jubilation, thinking that he is in Heaven-only later 
to realize that they were police lights; only later to 
realize that he was being helped to his feet by cops, 
and not angels.

It is after the hangover that he noticed that
he was in a cell; the last place he imagined
he could be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/12/2016 8:58:00 AM
Poor Mr. Pickles! Congrats on your win.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/14/2016 8:19:00 AM
Hehehe. Thanks for your applause, Richard!! :-)
Date: 9/8/2016 11:02:00 AM
Teddy, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "Tonight I will Write" and enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/14/2016 8:19:00 AM
Thanks, Linda!! *^_^* It is such an honor to be part of your blogs!! *_^
Date: 1/29/2015 2:14:00 PM
Oh poor Mr Pickles - made me smile:-) Hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/2/2015 1:23:00 AM
Lol. Great to hear you smile! ^_^
Date: 1/21/2015 11:36:00 AM
Looks like poor mr. pickles is in a pickle. Poor guy. What a disappointment to not be in heaven, but in jail.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/21/2015 11:36:00 PM
Hahaha. It is such a great disappointment indeed! Thank you for commenting on my work Isaiah! :-)
Date: 1/14/2015 9:34:00 AM
Great read - love the rythm!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/14/2015 11:31:00 PM
Thank you Simon! :-)
Date: 1/14/2015 9:22:00 AM
Very nice,the poem dear poet Teddy.Regards. -Safa
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/14/2015 9:26:00 AM
Thank you very much Muhammad! :-)
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