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The Night

The Night looms over The bed , stars twattle moon scrimp You lay eggs of love In my crevice and cleavage Warmth that can open the door

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/4/2015 11:46:00 AM
Rajat My Great Friend, This is indeed a most marvelous Tanka!! Your words and the images they paint are truly enthralling in every respect. This one is a "Keeper" and is going now in my "FAV File of Greats!" And, most definitely, it's a "Seven!" Very Well-Done Rajat!! Best Wishes to You With Divine Love and Peace, Gary
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/4/2015 11:54:00 AM
Love Gary Ingrid. God bless the both.Love from your friend >rajat

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