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The Night-Time Show

The moon glowed bright,
Under the sparkling sky.
Ocean made big waves.
  Dolphins did backflips,
    Fish swam in pools,
   As the wind whistled.








12-14-2020
Contest:Imagist
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Placed 10th in the contest

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Paul Callus Date: 12/16/2020 1:53:00 PM Your descriptive imagery is very striking, Alexis....certainly agrees with the contest title. Probably I'd have to pay double for a night show like this:) ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 12/15/2020 3:34:00 AM now this is what I call an activity poem that makes me want to jump into the sea and join the dolphins . I love the visuals of it all, thanks for sharing your very creative pen and mind Alexis, have a beautiful day, glad you came by with your lovely comments, take care. xo Login to Reply

Akkina Downing Date: 12/14/2020 9:37:00 PM Alexis, a simply beautiful picture you’ve painted for us :) Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/14/2020 6:13:00 PM And I’m in my rowboat watching the show! Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/14/2020 3:04:00 PM Wonderful show, Alexis. How much do the tickets cost? I'd like to buy enough for my whole family! G.L. in the contest, Gershon Login to Reply

Shirley Hawkins Date: 12/14/2020 3:03:00 PM How Lovely .... Take care ... Shirley Login to Reply

Frances Schiavina Date: 12/14/2020 11:51:00 AM Congratulations Alexis on enchanting images winning poem. Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 12/14/2020 11:37:00 AM Congratulations! Luckily, I don't need to imagine the scene but need only look out my window! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/14/2020 11:00:00 AM - An enchanting night, Alexis :) - Love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/14/2020 10:55:00 AM cute poem and I see you got a win. Big congrats, Alexis. Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 12/14/2020 10:42:00 AM A beautiful picture, Alexis. I especially love the dolphins doing backflips! Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Peter Dome Date: 12/14/2020 9:25:00 AM Wow love this wonderful visuals. love it. hope you won. Login to Reply

Edward Ibeh Date: 12/14/2020 7:00:00 AM Fantastic little piece, Alexis:-) Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Newton Ranaweera Date: 12/14/2020 6:16:00 AM Beautiful waves of imagery!! Congratulations, Alexis, on your placement!! Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/14/2020 6:00:00 AM Beautiful images, Alexis. Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 12/14/2020 3:27:00 AM I can see it Alexis! So nice :) Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 12/14/2020 3:07:00 AM Lovely, dear lady. A B L E S S I N G to read. God bless you always Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 12/14/2020 2:38:00 AM That was quite a pleasant show. Enjoyed thee read. ~~ Login to Reply