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The Newbie

The Newbie I am the newbie in rhyme Need words that chime Lip sync'd a monoku Pen said no! oh-no Scribbled a triolet Ink turned to violet Last crack at villanelle Two lines slid down a well! Penned: 06/15/2021 9:17 p.m. Lake Worth Florida USA

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 4/25/2023 8:33:00 PM

"Need words that chime" Me too. BOO HOO! You can't be a newbie if you know how to write a villanelle or a triolet. Wow. I confess to poem stress, I guess. Now, I am quite concerned, that I have a lot to learn. What a cute write and for me relatable. So happy to have found this one. It made me smile. :) :) :) A fun one!

Valsa George

Date: 1/9/2022 10:10:00 PM

This is so very interesting dear Anselmo ! I am also a newbie, experimenting with new forms !

Anselmo Boles
Date: 1/11/2022 5:33:00 PM

You might be new, but you have such great talent and finesse that allows you to mold your work in any shape or style, then come out with such impressive poems!! Let's you, Gershon and I, form "THE NEWBIE CLUB"! Lol. As always, thanks for the visit Valsa...ab

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/16/2021 7:54:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Love it. We're all newbies --- every new poem we write! Happiness and Joy, Gershon

Anselmo Boles
Date: 6/17/2021 12:03:00 AM

Thanks Gershon, I concur! Praise to all the "Newbies"!! Glad to have made you laugh...ab