Anselmo Boles Poet Rhyme

The Newbie

The Newbie



                                         I am the newbie in rhyme

                                         Need words that chime

                                         Lip sync'd a monoku

                                         Pen said no! oh-no


                                         Scribbled a triolet

                                         Ink turned to violet

                                         Last crack at villanelle

                                         Two lines slid down a well!







                                           Penned: 06/15/2021
                                                        9:17 p.m.
                                                        Lake Worth
                                                        Florida USA

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Marikate Kingston April 25, 2023 at 8:33 PM "Need words that chime" Me too. BOO HOO! You can't be a newbie if you know how to write a villanelle or a triolet. Wow. I confess to poem stress, I guess. Now, I am quite concerned, that I have a lot to learn. What a cute write and for me relatable. So happy to have found this one. It made me smile. :) :) :) A fun one!

Valsa George January 9, 2022 at 10:10 PM This is so very interesting dear Anselmo ! I am also a newbie, experimenting with new forms ! Anselmo Boles January 11, 2022 at 5:33 PM You might be new, but you have such great talent and finesse that allows you to mold your work in any shape or style, then come out with such impressive poems!! Let's you, Gershon and I, form "THE NEWBIE CLUB"! Lol. As always, thanks for the visit Valsa...ab

Gershon Wolf June 16, 2021 at 7:54 PM Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! Love it. We're all newbies --- every new poem we write! Happiness and Joy, Gershon Anselmo Boles June 17, 2021 at 12:03 AM Thanks Gershon, I concur! Praise to all the "Newbies"!! Glad to have made you laugh...ab