The New Old Crux

There was no knowing
the truth of the matter, 
what was, what would be, 
and there is no knowing now.
The small town lights
shone in the cold, dry night,
some may have illuminated
lonely strangers and rats
or quiet lovers parting, 
or strangeness in the night,
and we’d never know,
but somehow I hoped I might.
I’d never been asked 
so plainly what mattered most, 
and in a peculiar moment
I couldn’t say either way.
I had comfortably tethered 
for fear of being untethered,
but she may have tethered first,
it was her greatest need.
The small town windows
and suburban windows beyond
glowed, each in its place,
around a person or a thing,
or people and things,
that we did not know
and surely never would,
I hoped I never would.
There remains no knowing,
what was oddly was,
I’d say I don’t and didn’t care,
but I stand alone with it now.

10th December 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/18/2018 8:16:00 PM
Hi Lawrence, another deep and thought-provoking poem comes from your pen. As ever, I do love the content of this write. I spend time in reflection as I read. Your poetry does stir the emotions my friend. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 12/18/2018 11:09:00 PM
Thanks again, Mike, I'm always pleased at any write being well received. Visit and comment appreciated.
Date: 12/18/2018 5:49:00 AM
Very philosophical write, my dear friend, Lawrence. Excellent as usual...Charlie
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Date: 12/18/2018 7:28:00 AM
Thanks, Charles, always very happy for your visits and comments, and very glad you enjoyed.
Date: 12/17/2018 9:07:00 AM
Lawrence, your poem is very well written with so many layers. I have read it 3 times and I'm sure that I have not found all of them. Well done. All the best~ Warren
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Date: 12/18/2018 4:27:00 AM
Thanks, Warren, very pleased you like it, and particularly pleased if I can provoke any degree of contemplation. Visit and comment appreciated.
Date: 12/12/2018 3:21:00 AM
Hi Lawrence, A philosophical write, deep and questioning . We will never know all until that day when all will be revealed! I enjoyed your poem Lawrence. Do you live in South Africa because so do I. Best wishes, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/12/2018 4:07:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jennifer, really glad you enjoyed. Yes, Johannesburg.
Date: 12/10/2018 8:04:00 PM
My dear friend, your wonderfully deep and insightful poetry always gives me cause to reflect upon the past memories of my life and oft think, there once went I.. Closing verses sums up many times in my life that bittersweet memories remind me of my youth and my past.....
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Date: 12/11/2018 9:20:00 AM
Thank you, as always, for your encouragement and fellowship; appreciated no end, Robert.
Date: 12/10/2018 12:19:00 PM
Deep personal poetry is always the best.. you expressed with emotions..
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Date: 12/11/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thanks, S1, very pleased if you enjoyed it.
Date: 12/10/2018 10:01:00 AM
You write such wonderful poems of depth, Lawrence..I often have to pause and ponder! Fear of being un-tethered grips from time to time ..and we may claim to know but much we don't.
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Date: 12/11/2018 9:17:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay, your feedback and support is always very well received.
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