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the new coolness

haiku the new coolness without him by her side she rakes the leaves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/13/2012 12:29:00 PM
stunning juxtaposed line three ..use your cut markers -- Congrad's on your win!
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Date: 3/12/2012 7:59:00 PM
Excellent haiku, Reason. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Strictly" contest Reason. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/11/2012 12:29:00 PM
Very good haiku by you Reason.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/11/2012 12:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Reason! A sad scene you have created. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/11/2012 9:25:00 AM
an imagery that astounds, reason.. , hurrah for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs
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Date: 3/11/2012 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations a lovely piece xx
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Date: 3/11/2012 1:02:00 AM
congrats Reason on a perfect win for perfect words luv..
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Date: 3/1/2012 6:51:00 AM
Well worked - oxox Anne-Lise
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