The New Coolness 2, Senryu

senryu

the new coolness
without him by her side
she rakes the leaves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 12:29 PM
stunning juxtaposed line three ..use your cut markers -- Congrad's on your win!
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March 12, 2012 at 7:59 PM
Excellent haiku, Reason. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Strictly" contest Reason. Love,Carol
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March 11, 2012 at 12:29 PM
Very good haiku by you Reason.Congrats on your win.
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March 11, 2012 at 12:11 PM
Congrats on your win, Reason! A sad scene you have created. Blessings, Rhonda
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March 11, 2012 at 9:25 AM
an imagery that astounds, reason.. , hurrah for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs
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March 11, 2012 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations a lovely piece xx
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March 11, 2012 at 1:02 AM
congrats Reason on a perfect win for perfect words luv..
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March 1, 2012 at 6:51 AM
Well worked - oxox Anne-Lise
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