The Nascent Storm

Jade scythes
of areca fronds
slice slate air;
Medusa's snakes writhe.
Pewter arrows pierce
my garden.
I sit beneath an eave
pondering
the nascent storm.
Geraniums cloister
like vestal butterflies
in darkening loam
as a multitude
of emerald tufts
bend on the fleeing lawn.

5/12/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 10:04 PM
Congrats on you win, Dale. Powerful imagery.
Cozart Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Thanks again, Line!
Ashley Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 5:18 PM
Gorgeous imagery, Dale. Every poetic line is so creative and full of artistry. I especially love your first three lines and your last line - ingenious and inspired - and I love a good storm! Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Thank you, Susan!
Richards Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 10:33 AM
You have a gift for creating a unique blend of metaphoric understanding! Excellent!
Cozart Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 10:36 AM
Thanks very much, Carrie!
Carber Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Congrats, Dale-- you have a great affinity for nature.
Cozart Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 9:23 AM
Thanks, LJ!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Very very nice, Dale! Fave!
Cozart Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 12:48 PM
Thanks so much, Kim!
Wood Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Wow! Great imagery. I could have been there under the eaves with you after reading this. Congratulations.
Cozart Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Thanks so much, Dean.
Gentry Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 2:22 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
Cozart Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 8:01 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Carmack Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 12:21 AM
Impressive again, congrats Dale.
Cozart Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 8:01 AM
Thanks, Rob!
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