The Narcissistic Sun NO MORE

Son of a gun narcissistic 
With a personality pessimistic 
Everything resolves around you
Victor or victim that you bruise

When you look in silver mirror 
You can’t see because you fear me
My natural beauty that you deface
Graceful in defeat as you beat me again
And yet somehow I still WIN

I let you walk in my trap
Recorded it all and sent it zap
To the authorities for proof
No more abuse wear your cell
Meant for my mind on yours

I’m forgiving me for loving YOU
Parting ways is so sugary
I have reasons to enjoy life
No longer fearing empowered
I am a black flower blooming

abuseangerangstanti bullyingfree verse

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/17/2025 10:57:00 PM

Dear Karen, a powerful poem this is and one that feels like it comes from a very sincere deep part of your soul! Narcissistic sun, the prompt, youv used it here so well! I absolutely love the flow and depth of what youve conveyed and the flame of resilience that dances across your page in such poetic eloquence! Brilliant! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win. Thank you for joining in to raise awareness

Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2025 11:02:00 PM

Dearest Inky your prompts are always inspiring and I am honored you found merit in my poem!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2025 5:42:00 PM

what a powerful piece, write on and continue blossoming with your poetry and never let anyone deter you Karen! hugs jan xx (PS I've had black tulips and black orchids and they are beautiful just like you!!)

Karen Jones
Date: 3/10/2025 5:45:00 PM

Aw Jan thanks!