Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- The Naked Truth -

We are all brothers and sisters born without hate
Naked we were born to earth with purity and innocence as Lily 

Love has no barriers beyond our earthly grasp 
Right actions coming from the right setting, it starts from within

Sometimes we feel we are living inside a bubble
To live a good life, we must think, speak and act correctly

Destiny paints our divine promise colors a rainbow
Everything's really just small adjustments in your life

The search for the true love with joy and confidence in this world
Let your light shine bright, love inside the heart last forever

Of life our guiding angels a choir heavenly glamor
Angels over flowing universe with its clean and deep strength





Written by Liam Mcdaid & A-L Andresen 11.03.2015 
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Funom Makama June 8, 2015 at 3:27 AM This is adorable and extremely cute. Your soul just diffused into mine to wonderfully correlate with your message. Great work friend and thanks a zillion for visiting my page. I hope to be able to attract more of your attention. Once again this is an awesome piece of creativity. selah! Anne-Lise Andresen June 8, 2015 at 7:55 AM - Glad you enjoy it, Funom :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet March 27, 2015 at 2:04 PM Your words say a lot and convey strong emotions without a lot of window dressing. Nice job. Emile. Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2015 at 2:10 PM - Thank you Emile, always a pleasure to receive a visit and comments from you - I wish you a lovely weekend- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock March 25, 2015 at 1:28 PM A gem written by both of you. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2015 at 1:55 PM - Glad you enjoy it, Phyllis :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

William Gray March 24, 2015 at 2:42 AM Lovely piece of poetry, well written, enjoyed very much!.- Best Regards! Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2015 at 2:47 AM - William, thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak March 21, 2015 at 8:06 AM Stunning collaboration! Such wisdom, beauty and truth in this gem. Anne-Lise Andresen March 21, 2015 at 12:12 PM - Glad you enjoy it, Monterey :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Waldrop March 16, 2015 at 8:26 PM This is perfectly named. I enjoyed Truth I felt in my Heart while reading. Loved it. Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2015 at 4:18 AM - Glad you enjoy it, David :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus March 14, 2015 at 5:36 PM I was already mentally planning a well done to Anne Lise, till I came to the very end and saw Liam's name! Would not have known it was a co-write, otherwise!! So...well done to the both of you...wise minds working in unison. /x/ paul Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2015 at 5:15 AM - Thanks for visit and lovely comments, Paul :) - Happy weekend !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 13, 2015 at 12:39 PM a joy to read your enlightening collab.. you light me up, anne... happy Friday and be well.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen March 13, 2015 at 12:56 PM - Glad you enjoy it, dear friend Nette :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May March 12, 2015 at 4:17 PM Another great co write Anne...beautiful...hugs Anne-Lise Andresen March 13, 2015 at 4:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick March 12, 2015 at 12:11 PM Grat collaboration..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by...Sara Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2015 at 12:49 PM - Thanks Sara, for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez March 12, 2015 at 10:07 AM Another write I like. Made me stop, made me smile, made me think for a while. Everything there speaks wisdom. To both of you, Anne-Lise and Liam, 7 :) Kim Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2015 at 12:49 PM - Kim, thanks for visiting, a 7 and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux March 12, 2015 at 9:53 AM Wise perspectives! Hugs Rick. Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2015 at 12:48 PM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Richard - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath March 12, 2015 at 8:38 AM Very strong beautiful feeling of your nice heart expressed with beautiful words too. Genius poem. 7++ i feel here. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2015 at 8:59 AM - A pleasure to share with good friends Bl - thank you - I wish you a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 12, 2015 at 8:30 AM The truth may be naked BUT your verses are majestically dressed! Congratulations to both of you, Liam and Anne-Lise, Anne-Lise and Liam! A seven to each! Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2015 at 8:57 AM - Thank you my friend Demetrios, always a pleasure to receive a visit and comments from you - I wish you a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter March 12, 2015 at 5:21 AM Hello Liam and Anne- Lise! Very beautiful pens! Another wonderful collaboration from you my dearest friends. Just dazzling!I love it! A huge 7 +++ to each of you! A very inspiring and promising piece about true love dreams hopes friendship life to be held very close to ones heart.smiling. A very beautiful piece with a very positive message. I enjoyed it! Truly mighty golden pens! Wishing you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you always! :) Love n' hugs! xoxox D.^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2015 at 5:58 AM - Glad you enjoy it, dear friend Dorian :) - Thanks for visiting, a huge 7 and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 12, 2015 at 12:51 AM You and Liam are a wonderful writing duo, Anne Lise! I love these beautiful words from start to end...hugs, Rhonda Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2015 at 3:45 AM - Glad you enjoy it, dear Rhonda :) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith March 11, 2015 at 4:15 PM Wonderful collaboration you two....Tim Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2015 at 3:42 AM - Tim, thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison March 11, 2015 at 4:00 PM you write in perfect harmony Anne Lise and Liam - brilliant imagery - such a lovely flow to the lines:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2015 at 3:41 AM - Thanks for visiting, a 7 and lovely comments, dear Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid March 11, 2015 at 3:51 PM smiling your pen flowed beautiful anne lise a pleasure writing this with you pal wishing you a blessed beautiful night Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2015 at 3:37 AM - A new poem to our "collection" - Glad you liked the finished result - A pleasure to "share" word with you Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)