The Naked Truth

The stories I could tell and having told
of trials which would led thee upon a well worn path
within the skin and to the core the soul
through torrid memories of the long lost past.

I'd speak of Joseph whose passions prompted bliss
of kisses deep within this form of Eve 
of baths with gentle hands, where my soul heaved 
as fingers traced each mounds earthy contrast.

 And so that, days pleasures not bow to nights repasts
I'd share with you a tale of sun baths in rye fields
laying au naturel in hip high grass, as caution yields 
to tender taunting's upon an oh so, rigid mast.

Truly, I'd say for bold I am, and never cold,
the naked truth should never be, left undersold.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 5/26/2012 10:30:00 AM
Sometimes the truth hurts..Enjoyed reading your expressive and emotive..I have one about truth that I have started..I will try to post it today..It still needs a little work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/23/2012 7:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Deb. Outstanding. Great job. Nice going, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralph
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Date: 5/23/2012 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "SHHHH" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2012 3:06:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the "shhh" contest
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Date: 5/22/2012 9:33:00 PM
Debbie ,,Congratulations for your awesome entry in my shh!! and poem of the week contest...thank you for supporting my contest. Have yourself a wonderful and enjoyable day :-) PD
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Date: 5/22/2012 2:21:00 PM
Debbie congrats on your win..david
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Date: 4/26/2012 9:21:00 AM
was captured by the title, as i myself have written something of more or less the same topic. I realy enjoyed reading this. And thanx for helping with the sonet stay blessed Ronny
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Date: 4/22/2012 3:29:00 PM
Smile ˜ My sweeet baby * Sing to me my love ˜ Forevermore, John!:) ˜
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Date: 4/22/2012 2:49:00 PM
Nice poem just read, loved always, bl
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Date: 4/22/2012 8:05:00 AM
A wonderful poem, in a form i do not know, you sure are the queen of the poetic word. harry
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Date: 4/20/2012 11:41:00 PM
Nice...pd
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Date: 4/20/2012 2:56:00 PM
Very nice,Debbie... :o)
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Date: 4/22/2012 3:31:00 PM
...Bye Sweeet Baby!:)
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