The Nail Biter

He bites his nails beside me on the bed
so loudly!  This strange habit is most grating.
I’d like to throw a pillow at his head,
but he would just continue, not abating.

I’m used to just how vexing he can get,
like when he begs for food that I am eating.
When someone comes to call, he gets upset;
then settles down and gives a gleeful greeting -

Unless the visitor is someone small!
He sits and stares if I pick up a child
then panics if the infant starts to bawl.
I love my doggy though he gets so wild!

Although a naughty child himself is he,
how sweet and trusting is his love for me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:07 AM
darn it Andrea you did not date your poem if you had I would have placed it 3rd hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 11:09 AM
crap, how do I miss these things?
Thirtyseven Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 9:21 PM
Dogs, oh yeah, for the love of dogs. First-class dedication, what fun.
Macmillan Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 12:04 PM
CUTE! I'm a sucker for this kind of love poem ;) If for a contest, best of wishes
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 9:43 PM
Ahhh, he sounds adorable! My little dog follows me around the house like my third child. It drives me crazy, but she's the sweetest little thing! Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest...love and blessings, Rhonda
Guzzi Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 4:32 PM
Wow Andie, what a naughty pup LOL. Light & Love
Horne Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 2:46 PM
awww, a poem for Snickers? so cute
Onclaud Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 11:15 AM
our house animals need to be part of the show... how endearing is this, andie... my doggy is an attention - getter as well... ohh so fine for shadow !.. huggs
Sirak Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 7:48 AM
Our pets do carve out spaces in our hearts to reside in.
Dua Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 3:37 AM
:) .... something true for me ... Nice Sonnet ....
Meade Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 11:08 PM
I wonder what he says about you? Loving master who . . . . Nicely done Andrea
Meade Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 12:08 PM
Ah ha! I hope he is chasing heedless squires in doggie heaven . . .
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 11:45 PM
He says, "She bites her nails too, just not noisily like me. And she lays around a lot watching tv and is always on her computer doing POetry Soup!! But I am a good doggie and I sit by and just endure it all." (by the way, this is a poem i polished up about Ollyver, and he died years ago. Best doggie I ever had)
Kiser Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 1:46 PM
Reminds me of a friend I had who bit her toenails.
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 5:46 PM
hahaha. an actual person who was able to get her foot up to her mouth to bite her toe nails?? Incredible!!! Actually, I am a nail biter. Just like my mother. My daughter was able to break the cycle.
Yvonne Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 10:24 AM
Ollyver! Great work. Another winner. I may write my first sonnet for this contest if a notion strikes me. You know I have to fav Ollyver!
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 11:45 PM
hahahha. Very funny!!!
Yvonne Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 6:04 PM
Snickers? Who is Snickers?
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 5:44 PM
Maurice, you are not faving snickers. this was Ollyver. My bad doggie that I had to give away many years ago. (I just used an old poem never posted before, and revised it for this contest) Later I will show you where you can read of my experience with Ollyver, where I believe he came back to see me on his way to heaven
Poet Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 9:57 AM
Love it Andrea!Very good Sonnet!
Kayode Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 9:42 AM
The more reason he is a pet,an excellent job on the theme; this will surely top the table, goodluck in the contest Andrea.
Johnson Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Gross and disgusting of an animal so trusting. He must be sure your love is pure, or out the door you would be thrusting. Peace. :)
Bauer Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 7:34 AM
adorable and very cleverly written, andrea!
Callus Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 5:59 AM
Hi Andrea....I'm sorry that I jumped the gun and was going to blame someone else!! It did not take long to realize who you were referring to. Pets, especially dogs and cats, make for great and loving companions. // paul
Allison Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 5:59 AM
oh this would drive me mad Andrea - are you sure its written about a man not a dog! Hugs jan xxx
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 5:45 PM
hahaha. YEP, this was Ollyver, my first doggie, a miniature eskimo that I loved dearly.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 5:08 AM
oh i know the feeling in this one andrea i have a dog myself who barks steady in his dreams smiling beautifully penned dear friend
Arrow Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 4:57 AM
This defintely describe a loving dog with all habits and glories.Lovely this is.
Cruz Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 3:10 AM
I love this. My love of animals is big. thanks for this wonderful poem.
A. Sharma Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 3:08 AM
Brilliant write Andrea! I too had one long time back, very affectionate but ur world crashes as they hv a short life span n very soon die!
Anish Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 11:26 PM
Never had a dog but I like them. All I have is an electric fish tank - with images of fish floating by. What kind of dog do you have? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Smith Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 10:02 PM
You get the good with the bad...luckily he so cute...hugs Tim
May Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 9:46 PM
Lovely sonnet Andrea....best wishes
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