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The Mystic Rose

Petals of white roses sprinkled over virgin heart scents of untold perfume when consumed by the lust of young lovers innocently thrusting toward future dreams Fragrances of desire Now awakened By love

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 4/17/2014 8:58:00 PM

Completely beautiful my dear friend love this very much, love the sprinkled over virgin heart the most, cheri also thank you for your cool comment.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/17/2014 11:37:00 PM

Thank you Cherl, and hope you and loved ones are doing well!!!

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 4/16/2014 1:26:00 PM

Beautiful little gem Arthur!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/17/2014 11:35:00 PM

Thank you Keith, much appreciated

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/16/2014 12:18:00 AM

How very nice of a write, ,,,song on TV right now is Roberta Flack/ First Time Ever I saw Your Face from movie " Play Misty For Me. I think the song goes well with your poem :) have a great day !

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/17/2014 11:33:00 PM

Thanks Debbie

Mel Merrill

Date: 4/15/2014 11:40:00 PM

Arthur, How are things in soupland? I enjoy your writes; descriptive and imagistic. Kudos my friend. Drop by anytime. Peace and blessings, Mel :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/17/2014 11:32:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/15/2014 11:26:00 AM

Dear Arthur, I loved your description of love unfolding like the petals of a rose. Was this inspired by the Soup's own "Mystic Rose"? She has such a beautiful soul! (Sorry my hospice poem made you cry; cling to faith to carry you through this difficult time, Arthur. Your friend will be in my prayers.) Love, carolyn

Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/15/2014 9:35:00 PM

Hi there , not this poem, it was an unfinished one of awhile ago, but with the title I smiled and thought of Mystic Rose, will have to get her to read it!!!! and yes she is a beautiful person!!!