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The Mystery of the Girl and Monsters

the mystery of the girl and monsters
in the fog, lost, precarious knocking,
lighthouses, antique dresses,
the back and forth of my imagination.

at sea - the deep, dark movement
of unseen waves, unremembered
dendrites firing at each suspenseful turn.
the real storm, unrelenting all-night-feast
of thunder cracks and lightning bolts -

has Frankenstein’s monster come alive?
the scary knock at the door - don’t answer it!

we laugh so hard, how imaginings and story
support our fear. likewise, the top of the hill -
are you kidding it’s dark? one must

not venture where one might spy a host
of trouble; but the girl you’d follow
in the drizzly mist, to the fashionable past -
inviting, suspiciously exciting, an escape.

with monsters, well…watch out for the tale -
a little-red-riding-hood-precautionary blow.

7/2/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 9:13 PM
A tale that is worth telling more than once Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 6:35 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Baker Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 8:29 AM
Intriguing and engaging tale my friend. You kept me wondering and thinking throughout the poem and beyond. :-) Thanks for sharing. Hugs, Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 6:35 PM
Awesome! Thanks, Bill!
May Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 11:52 AM
Monsters real or imagined can be scary, Nicely penned Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 6:32 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Kannan Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 6:24 AM
So intriguing and interesting... Beautifully penned...
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 10:05 AM
Thank you, Supraja! :)
DiMino Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 2:27 AM
:)Delightful! One cannot write poetry, if opposed to mystery, suspense and just plain outrageous fantasy! So many wonderful lines and images in this fine work. Great read! Thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 10:05 AM
Thank you so much! xx
Kalita Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 12:51 PM
So creatively creative, fantsy and reality with the marvellous storyline to cater to the senses.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 2:48 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 1:09 AM
You have excellent fantasies. Lovely poem. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 5:50 AM
Thank you, my friend! ~ hugs!
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 8:24 PM
'Imaginings and the story' certainly are a potent combo!! Really enjoyed the back-and-forth of this creative tale, Kim! ~ Boo! :) Werewolf calling
Rodrigues Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 5:50 AM
LOL! Thank you!
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