The Mystery of Life

He used to tell me

Your queen is a christian queen
Your love is a christian love
Your fate is a christian fate

But where is my queen? She died in exile
Now where is my love? He dies for exile
And where is my fate? It's dyeing my exile

And nobody answers me anymore,
Not even the wind
that we used to trust

But that was when
We were still 
Together

Together...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/29/2014 6:59:00 PM
THIS IS A wonderful poem... great writing... your pen has a flair to it.. a true poet you are..
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Date: 10/7/2013 8:25:00 AM
So great to see you have found your muse! Well done Hanitra.
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/7/2013 1:21:00 PM
But I am sooo tired and depressed, sometimes, I can't even walk or talk... for entire days! Iy's incredible! Then, of a sudden, everything is OK! It's a strange situation I never experienced before! I can get very slow, it"s incredible! Anyway...My explanations are coming soon!Hugs!
Date: 10/3/2013 9:40:00 PM
Life is sure a mystery. We never know what is going to happen from one moment to the next. Thanks for reading my poem..... Lucilla
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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/4/2013 8:26:00 AM
My best thanks and blessings to you, dear Lucilla
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