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The Mystery of Humpty Dumpty Has Been Cracked

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Humpty Dumpty never ever sat on a wall In reality he was very much an odd ball I understand he drank far too much alcohol And he also suffered from high cholesterol He switched places, someone was his fall guy And this fall guy told everyone that he could fly His head got smashed in, the eggspert did die Now he’s been scrambled and resides in the sky In truth Humpty’s deception could never be foiled for if he sits out in the sun he’d soon be hard boiled the mystery of humpty Dumpty Contest sponsored by Faraz Ajmal 6/28/18

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Tim Parry

Date: 7/10/2018 12:21:00 PM

A nice spin on an old tale the flow starts off a bit out, but has a wicked sense of humour and a cool epilogue to boot well done Tim

Eve Roper

Date: 7/8/2018 10:18:00 PM

A lovely the twist in this story of Humpty Dumpty, Jan. Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2018 3:42:00 AM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/7/2018 11:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. There's always someone who has to make sense. Fun story. Enjoyed!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/8/2018 3:38:00 AM

Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 7/7/2018 1:06:00 PM

Very cute, Jan. Congrats.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2018 1:11:00 PM

Thanks so much Dale:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/7/2018 10:35:00 AM

Hi Jan, I am not surprised to see you in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2018 11:06:00 AM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/7/2018 8:05:00 AM

It is a great poem with deep imaginations, certainly a joy to read, many congratulations on yoyr 2nd position in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day

Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2018 8:57:00 AM

Many thanks Faraz:-) hugs jan xx

Jasmine Koria

Date: 7/3/2018 6:00:00 PM

This was a fun read!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/3/2018 6:08:00 PM

thanks:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/1/2018 10:06:00 PM

Aw, Jan, what am I gonna do now? First they took away Santa Claus...Then the tooth fairy...And now Humpty Dumpty!...What's there left to believe in? LOL! Thanks for the chuckles. Best wishes, Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 7/2/2018 2:33:00 AM

thanks my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Bonnie House

Date: 7/1/2018 12:50:00 AM

A good one. Humor is great.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2018 4:05:00 AM

Thanks Bonnie:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/30/2018 2:10:00 PM

Lol! Amazing how creative and funny you are. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/30/2018 6:18:00 PM

thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 6/29/2018 8:02:00 AM

Love this creative sunny side up write Jan; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/29/2018 8:09:00 AM

Thanks so much Che, the funny thing is I'm not a great egg fan:-) hugs Jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/29/2018 5:49:00 AM

Ah, this is really original. You cut me smiling and rooting for that poor lil' egg. Gl in the contest Jan, ra ra ra . !

Jan Allison
Date: 6/29/2018 5:58:00 AM

Thanks so much Pixie:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/28/2018 10:44:00 PM

Your creativity is soaring, dear. You are so accomplished. I could never write on this theme, but you've done it with finesse. BTW...thanks for your lovely comments on Drake's blog. Loved it. :) Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/29/2018 1:34:00 AM

aww Eileen you have been such a support since I joined and was so encouraging especially when I started writing with Darren:-) hugs jan xx

Lyric Man

Date: 6/28/2018 3:10:00 PM

Jan.. You define the bar for creativity and humor converging! Great write as always. And thank you for having my back and never believing my actions led to someone's demise!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/29/2018 1:33:00 AM

LM we have been buddies since we joined in the same week - I will always watch your back and now she has 'died' there is no way she come back to haunt you here!!!!!!! Got to pity the poor woman she needs help, whereas you have it from your friends here - keep music ALIVE:-( hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/28/2018 11:26:00 AM

Very funny, love the title!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/29/2018 1:30:00 AM

Thanks Tania, I think a catchy title pulls the reader in:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/28/2018 11:24:00 AM

Lol! Jan, Your imagination and humor soared in this piece. I thoroughly enjoyed your spin on what happened to Humpty Dumpty. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 6/29/2018 1:30:00 AM

I'm not sure what the sponsor is after Alexis, I'm so glad you enjoyed my silly thoughts:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/28/2018 8:54:00 AM

This is eggciting Jan, Nearly fried today and the waves battered me,enough lol. Good luck. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 6/29/2018 1:25:00 AM

lol Tom, enjoy your holidays - never known it so hot since we moved here, its positively tropical!:-) seen a few lobsters on the local beach lol hugs Jan xx