The Mystery of Fear

Hollow enemies
Klaxons bore my demons
Vanishing breezes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/10/2012 11:32:00 AM
Awesome write Jimbo :) hope you are having a great weekend! Wilma
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Date: 6/4/2012 1:16:00 PM
Eight words can say a lot James, well done. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/29/2012 10:33:00 AM
Had to look up the word Klaxon, but made the write alive for me. Nice piece.
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Date: 5/28/2012 7:13:00 PM
Well my poetic friend, at one time, ya would have stumped me with this great write sir, yet, my son owns an 18 wheeler, and when he uses the "Klaxon" on his rig, most souls feel like the express of this write of yours James....*smiles* Now that is if'n I'm on the right(write) tract my friend !Or, it could well be, a sax player that you don't like...lol....Anywho, what a great write sir...Have a beautiful week James...much love, james...I like this one too much...in mine favz !
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Date: 5/28/2012 12:48:00 PM
A very interesting one. That first line especially!
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Date: 5/28/2012 7:59:00 AM
Expressive with a few words...Sara
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Date: 5/27/2012 9:16:00 PM
wow great imagery!
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Date: 5/27/2012 12:46:00 PM
Jimbo, very good ..David
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Date: 5/26/2012 9:59:00 PM
VERY INTERESTING POEM!!!
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