The Myrtle - Nw

The Myrtle sits 
single, lonely
at the crossroads
adorned
with one hundred
cobalt bottles;
waiting.
Evening soon comes
and gentle winds
blow softly
that Aphrodite
sings
her sweet, enticing song.
Weak, evil spirits;
guileless souls,
will, helpless,  
answer, her siren call.
Then trapped
Inside the bottle blue
'till dawn.
When morning sun will
seal their fate.



A Note In The Wind Poetry Contest; placed 3rd
Sponsored by: Charles Messina  
Date written: 29th October 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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George Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 6:44 PM
The image of myrtle sitting in cobalt bottles until dawn arrives is so very imaginative! Congratulations on your win dear Terry !
Miller Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 2:05 AM
Thank you Valsa
Rose  Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 11:40 AM
The heart sings of its color Cobalt blue, congrats on your win :)
Miller Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 2:06 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments
Messina Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 4:41 AM
This is really well-written, Terry. I enjoyed it very much. Congratulations on your winning placement. Charlie
Miller Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 8:16 AM
Thank you, Charles, for the placement, kind comments, and for running this contest; there was certainly a spread of interpretations!
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 10:11 AM
such and interesting one. All those cobalt bottles!! Great images too.
Miller Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 2:22 AM
Thank you Andrea, I appreciate your kind comments
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