Lisa Ricci Poet Free verse

The Music of Us

"the music of us"

the sun is in our eyes
the stars are in our hearts
the ocean breathes in our souls

all the looks and touches
all the whispers and flames
add to the music of us

all beautiful for you for me
we discover the moon high above
the music of us is everlasting

SkyWatcher
12-06-22

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FJ Thomas January 8, 2023 at 1:13 PM A magical beauty Lisa, enchanting even. FJ Thomas January 10, 2023 at 8:28 AM I completely understand. I am definitely not as consistent as I would like to be. Lisa Ricci January 10, 2023 at 8:05 AM Good Morning. I am very sorry for this late response. I am not consistent with logging on unfortunately. I thank you very much for the wonderful and graceful review and comment to which I never take for granted from any member. I'm glad you liked my entry. Have a wonderful day and may there be love for all. Thank you.

Stephan McBride December 8, 2022 at 8:27 AM Beautiful, I love this , Gods beauty you see daily , I love your joy and peace felt through your poems,. Angela tune I don't know if you know her but she has this joy and peace in her work as well Lisa Ricci December 8, 2022 at 9:40 AM Thank you once again Stephan. Yes, I believe in love for all and I will always consider it to be a heartbeat of poetry. May all know of love. Have a wonderful afternoon. It has been a pleasure that our paths have crossed with poetry. Thank you.

Arlo Parker December 7, 2022 at 2:01 PM Lovely, Miss Lisa. ~;o) Lisa Ricci December 8, 2022 at 2:56 AM Good Morning Arlo. It is very nice to meet you. Thank you for visiting my entry and for the generous review to which I never take for granted. May there be love for all. Thank you again. Enjoy poetry and poetrysoup too.