The Music of Autumn Leaves

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(Entry for the Autumn Leaves Poetry Contest sponsored by Jcb Brul, submitted October 11, 2024 - Second Place)

Upon the final strains of Summer's swansong,
Autumn makes her appearance,
singing a harmonious hymn of hues
with scarlets, ambers, golds and russets,
the trees resplendent in their festive finery.

In the still pleasant air
the foliage falls as feathers, slow dancing;
an emerging carpet, chattering in the breeze,
sending sweet sounds of a susurrus symphony.

The music of autumn leaves 
is a serenade for the senses...
a paean to Gaia: soft, soothing, serene.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 10/31/2024 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in this contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it. Sara K
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Date: 10/31/2024 10:07:00 AM
Thank you, Sara. I appreciate it. Take care. J.
Date: 10/27/2024 8:53:00 AM
I love your autumn music, Rustling leaves and whispering winds ,…..beautiful Cingratulations. SuZ
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Date: 10/27/2024 4:50:00 PM
Thank you, Suzanne. Nice to hear from you again. Take care.
Date: 10/25/2024 10:27:00 AM
Feelings of tranquility and peacefulness. Congratulations Jim! :)
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Date: 10/25/2024 12:41:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. So glad you enjoyed it. Cheers from Canada. J.
Date: 10/23/2024 3:52:00 PM
Very creative and colorful winning work. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Way to go. Congratulations...Sara K
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Date: 10/23/2024 3:55:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. I appreciate it. J.
Date: 10/13/2024 4:28:00 PM
WOW! outstanding imagery Jim your autumnal masterpiece is music to my ears:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/13/2024 8:46:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. I decided on a different take to describe fallen leaves: aural instead of visual or tactile. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Cheers from Canada. Jim
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