The Music Box

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This is dedicated to Andrea Diehich, a very special lady whom is well known on the soup,

But to me she has been a loyal friend and inspiration, I hope you enjoy your Halloween

Poem dear lady, this ones for you. 

Is it simply just a wooden music box?
Charming the human soul, with its melodic undertone,
What a hypnotic melody it so plays, enticing the listener
With its delicate waltz' sweetly strumming, exposing it's
Mystical quality of the supernatural
By its spiritual essence attractant, I'm thus so memorized,
A ballerina dancing in step, with the spell cast upon me,
Thus do so I spin, on this stationary pedestal, unable to move
On my own volitional power of chose and free will, 
I've be consumed utterly,
By the haunting tune, compelling me do its evil bidding.
The notes grow slower, unwinding until perfectly still,
But I'm not in a daydreams nightmare, I suddenly realize 
This absurdity is reality, has become real.
I'm that tiny figure within a child's musical box,
Frozen in stances freeze, unable to cry
Out for help, for made of wax am I now.
Then the lid is gently shut upon me, and in the
Darkness a sadistic voice, heckles and mocks
Me, speaking in musical notes it sings a deadly
Lullaby, rest eternal my beauty for you belong
To me now.
I've become a play thing to be tormented,
Languishing within this jewelry box.
Caught in this land of giants, whom wind
These musical chimes, to join me as a 
Prisoner's collection, of a thief called music.
Whom orchestrates this symphony of the demonic?
I dare not ask, for the voices anger would
Ravish what little is left of my humanity,
So I smile, and I dance at its pleasures
Whim, but within my soul a flickering
Ray does burn still, and it is called hope.
The music screams in terror's disbelief,
For the giants house has caught in flames,
And now he is the prisoner captured
Within a wooden tinder box.
I do so smile as I myself melt away,
Listening to the voice begging for help,
But no one comes to aid such evil as he.
But I am free at last, and except death
As a comforting friend's reprieve,
From the beast, is it just a simple?
Wooden music box.
 
BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/6/2014 7:18:00 PM
This is a beautiful dedication, Andrea is one of the sweetest poets on her... you are a charming poet, this poem suits her well...Love Linda
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Date: 10/6/2014 5:06:00 PM
Cherl, you are mesmerized by the music box...I am mesmerized by your poem...especially by the tragic ballerina. Well done! // paul
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Date: 10/5/2014 12:24:00 PM
what mystery you create where your feelings have far exceeded your usual style, cherl...a haunting read ; I'm aswed!// huggs
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Date: 10/5/2014 4:11:00 AM
Cheri, I was waiting for you next Halloween specialty. You never disappoint me with your enchanting writes!! I am very sure that Andrea will adore "The Music Box" very, very much. Your imagery and metaphors synergize and enthrall the reader, while quite elegantly walking the reader through the verse to fall victim as well to that "haunting tune," and sense the utter horror of being "captured within a wooden tender box." A Magnificent Write My Friend!! Cheers and My Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 10/5/2014 3:54:00 AM
wow i have to say cherl i tip my hat to you excellent piece
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