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The Murder of Cherry Creek Town

Sounds of a Day in the Past Cherry Creek was a thriving small town Children played on swings up and down. They screamed with delight and why not? Today with no school, so homework forgot. How they laughed and frolicked and ran, All cares forgotten, catch me if you can! The swings were well-oiled and so no creaks Could be heard, but happy they enjoyed their leaps. Not far away, parents and singles formed a march Protesting against chemical factory built beyond the arch. Sounds of a Day in the Present Cherry Creek is now a ghost town And all the rusted swings are down. The chemist factory spoilt their fun. Children in Cherry Town were none. So many died from deadly fumes All protests covered in all newsrooms. But to no avail, for protests fell on dead ears. Parents left to other places shedding tears. The only sound you hear is the wind No swing moved, empty all rust lined. But I forgot the sound of money, The factory simply insults me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 4/1/2024 10:04:00 AM
Victor, I like your strong, dramatic way of making a point, which stirs emotions.
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Date: 3/14/2024 12:21:00 PM
Hello Victor this is so sad. I think Cheery Hill wikll always be a ghost town. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 1/31/2024 6:58:00 AM
It happens dear Victor. and you have captured it with your marvelous words. :)
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Date: 1/30/2024 1:26:00 PM
Reminded me of working with children. A shame of some of these companies don’t care if they hurt anyone. Love the write. hugs my friend
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Date: 1/30/2024 3:40:00 AM
Very haunting. I like the rhyme.
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Date: 1/30/2024 2:59:00 AM
There are so many ghost towns around these days, once thriving little hubs, employing so many. Families happy and thriving. You've captured all the emotions so well dear Victor. Greed in the so called name of 'progress'. A fave for me...Hugs
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Date: 1/30/2024 1:38:00 AM
wonderful, factories become the ennemy things must change as soon as possible, beginning with this poem, humanity is in danger, you reminded me a movie with Julia Roberts, Thanks Victor for fighting evil
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Date: 1/29/2024 11:09:00 PM
Oh my, this is such a poignant and reflective write, dear Victor. It's really a disheartening situation when everything so jovial and magical turns to a mere tapestry of soot and ash. These plants and factories result in the abandonment of happiness for many, sigh. Its extremely sad to read. You've captured those emotions so impeccably here with creative storytelling and artistic wordplay by painting before and after scenes of the town Cherry Creek. Loved reading this, a FAV absolutely..
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Date: 1/29/2024 9:11:00 PM
It's very sad that the effects of greedy decisions aren't felt until it's too late. This is a haunting, melancholy and beautifully composed poem. It is in my faves.
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Date: 1/29/2024 6:56:00 PM
So sad that a thriving town was made a ghost town by these chemicals, and this still persists today, Powerful write
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Date: 1/29/2024 6:48:00 PM
This sounds like a true story. I've heard it about many places. So sorry to hear of such devastation. Keep writing. This was good.
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Date: 1/29/2024 6:38:00 PM
Greed, the love of money ... the root of all evil! Tragic tale of Cherry Creek, Victor. Good poetry, my friend. Bill
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Date: 1/29/2024 6:37:00 PM
How sad when money comes before people, this has an unhappy ending to it, but it was well told, Victor,
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Date: 1/29/2024 6:04:00 PM
Very meaningful and relevant, this write, of us as a collective polluting Mother Earth
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Date: 1/29/2024 5:08:00 PM
enjoyed the compare and contrast within you poem, Victor. This is a profound piece of writing, masterfully executed...and so relevant even today. Faving this one...Sara
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Date: 1/29/2024 12:56:00 PM
This is such a well written, profound write dear Victor. The comparison between the past and the present is so sad. The swings happily in use and then rusted, empty swings really stood out for me. The image conveyed the ghost town so well. The loss of childhood - no life or sound just the wind. Haunting. Impactful. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you :):)
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Date: 1/29/2024 12:17:00 PM
- The little city of joy ... became the gloomy city of death ... sad when this happens, Victor - Great written :) - hugs
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Date: 1/29/2024 10:51:00 AM
You wrote a very meaningful and relevant poem. Even today this hideous stuff is happening all around us. love this one.
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Date: 1/29/2024 10:20:00 AM
Dear Victor, this is so poignant and creative how you’ve shown us through your poetic lines how things changed, a place that was once so lively and carefree now remains a ghost town. This actually resonates and would resonate with many in many parts of the world too. And those last two lines hit so strong! Absolutely love this one! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
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Date: 1/29/2024 9:32:00 AM
You have skillfully crafted a poem with impeccable vocabulary and vivid imagery, delving into the concept of progress and its associated costs, Victor. Your ability to artfully depict contrasting perspectives is truly remarkable, and I have grasped the underlying message conveyed.
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Date: 1/29/2024 8:25:00 AM
This is the sad situation in many places. Factories emitting poisonous fumes are set up everywhere and they are a threat to human lives. But the mercenary interests of the people outrun all human considerations and concerns. Thank you for sharing your powerful poem and thus creating awareness in the people.
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Date: 1/29/2024 7:16:00 AM
Sad when a plant causes the downfall of the people in the area. So much is happening around us (that we do not know is dangerous or deadly) that we do not know about, and we go about life as if it is forever. It is so terrible though when chemicals can cause terrible problems to all who live around that plant or factory. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for visiting my page. Sara
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Date: 1/29/2024 6:56:00 AM
so sad - and so true in many cases. God bless you Victor. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/29/2024 5:57:00 AM
Cost of progress! You painted the two views brilliantly Victor. I hear your message.
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Date: 1/29/2024 5:49:00 AM
Very well written, very profound, but unfortunately, that's the reality of many places. Factories and other companies gain the ground of what one day was a little piece of heaven. Money is spreading its roots very deeply. Great story Victor, though sad. Have a nice Monday!
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