The Mouse

We have a mouse in the house.
Not an average mouse
But rather a mouse with some nous 
That trips traps as it goes traipsing through the house.
A mouse whose downfall I am planning 
Even while I am jotting.

A foolproof trap I will find, 
Before I go out of my mind. 

It will be one of a kind,
That will attest to my state of mind. 
And show beyond doubt that I have more nous
Than a mouse.

It will send a message to all mouse kind
That it is time to leave this city behind
In case I lose my nous 
And sacrifice the house to get rid of a mouse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/26/2024 6:22:00 PM
Brilliant! Yes, simply.
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David Smith
Date: 12/26/2024 8:06:00 PM
Thank you Mathew. We seem to be mouse free at present. The cat we have now is a tiger when it comes to keeping mice out. Was a bit hit and miss with cats in past. I remember as a kid waiting with slug gun outside mouse holes. While I was using poetic license with this poem. There are people who take it personally if a mouse invades their house. May 2025 be a good year for you Mathew. I turn 71 on the 1st.
Date: 7/4/2016 6:47:00 AM
- ....... I read this with a smile, David :) ..... I think mice are really cute .... but, do not want them in my house (= • _ • =) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/4/2016 6:49:00 AM
Fair point. Our most recent cat Bella got run over. Not quite ready to replace her. She was a good mouser and fast. Also had plenty of nous. May have a rethink. Thanks for feedback. My book on state of childcare in NZ is now soup classifieds. sample chapter on link as preview. David
Date: 7/4/2016 6:27:00 AM
Ha Ha Ha, Great! But why no explicit thought about letting them smell a cat ...
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Date: 7/4/2016 3:30:00 AM
lol, you will not be the first to try and invent a better mousetrap David, could feel your frustration mate Bob
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David Smith
Date: 7/4/2016 7:02:00 AM
Thanks. Fortunate we have no real larger pests here unless you count drunks and drugees. Police got a few good busts though. Hope you are well. Keep having fun with words. Cheap amusement. David
Date: 7/3/2016 8:47:00 AM
You know the saying," Invent a better mousetrap and the world will beat a path to your door". Love the humor!
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Date: 7/3/2016 7:17:00 AM
A very good mousey story x well done
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David Smith
Date: 7/3/2016 5:17:00 PM
Thanks Wendy. Story ongoing. Thanks for visiting. David from NZ
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