The Mouse

The seas have gotten choppy the ships have all been moored the winds have gotten mighty a shiver's slipping through the door The docks are all now empty the lighthouse has gone dim the seagulls all are nesting up on the marshy hill The sirens are now blaring the skies are dark and gray the storm has reach the shoreline there's panic in the air The flags are torn and tattered there's destruction everywhere When the storm has finally ended and a calm has now appeared one lone mouse's found scurrying searching for his home his hole is blocked and broken no one hears his calls he's lost and cold and lonely a teardrop starts to fall each step he takes is painful joy is never near his life is all but over he's no longer here

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/15/2015 3:18:00 PM
Very nice pen Tim!I enjoyed your very descriptive cute sad mouse tale.What an adventure my dear friend.A 7 from me!Again thanks for visiting my page.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you! :) D.
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Date: 4/13/2015 2:50:00 PM
The lone mouse will always find his way home.All He needs is smell the 'cheese'..Sad poem with detailed descriptions.Made me think of ratatoulle.
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Date: 4/13/2015 3:04:00 PM
Sometimes the mouse needs help in finding that cheese..Thank you for your kind comment...hugs Tim
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