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The Mountain Speaks

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(This is a "childhood" poem, written many years ago.) High above the pristine falls the looming mountain lifts its walls. A monolith of stony gray, with bulky lips, it seems to say: "Eons passed since I've been here; nothing have I seen to fear while above my walls, from year to year, about the world below I peer. My walls so high, so steep and strong, protect me well from all that's wrong. Would that Man below could see how I keep all harm from me. Would that he could build a wall about his home, his family -- all -- to keep them safe from Evil's charm, which causes Man unending harm."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/12/2016 3:55:00 PM
Leo, although you wrote it years ago, it has something meaningful in content.
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Date: 2/20/2014 11:03:00 PM
Delightful, Leo, You have blessed me today with your poetry. Thanks and have a great evening.
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Date: 2/17/2014 8:12:00 AM
one word "superb" Leo congrats on being featured lovely write hug
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Date: 2/2/2012 12:02:00 PM
Excellent work that you did as a child..Enjoyed reading this one today...The childhood talent follows the man..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 1/26/2012 3:07:00 PM
A lovely glimpse of why your talent shines so brightly now. What an insightful child with an understanding far beyond your years, I am sure.
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Date: 12/1/2011 2:09:00 AM
Ahhhh the walls...I know them well. You've captured this idea of building them so well. It's a defense mechanism...is it not? Well done, Enjoyed !!
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Date: 6/10/2011 12:55:00 PM
Gosh, you sure expressed a lot of wisdom in this poem, Leo. Lots of people build walls around themselves and refuse to let others get to know them. I'm taking the walls down so I can have more social interaction, but I understand what you're saying here. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:50:00 PM
i really enjoy reading your poetry it is so varied and so full of life. David
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Date: 6/8/2011 7:56:00 AM
Really interesting poetry Leo, i did enjoy it and thanks so much for your heart warming comment on my poetry REFLECTION.Marvel Godwyn
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:07:00 AM
Very nice.Thanks for catching my mistake in my haiku-Sizzle..I fixed it.Have a great day love.Kacey
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Date: 5/27/2011 9:18:00 PM
You sure could have fooled me about it being a childhood poem, Leo. Well done thought generating poem. Pretty sharp.
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Date: 5/26/2011 4:37:00 PM
WOW...this is a very rich poem...the words themselves so lure the reader to keep...reading. enjoyed every second...Love Randa
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