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The Mountain Speaks

(This is a "childhood" poem, written many years ago.)

High above the pristine falls
the looming mountain lifts its walls.
A monolith of stony gray,
with bulky lips, it seems to say:
"Eons passed since I've been here;
nothing have I seen to fear
while above my walls, from year to year,
about the world below I peer.
My walls so high, so steep and strong,
protect me well from all that's wrong.
Would that Man below could see
how I keep all harm from me.
Would that he could build a wall
about his home, his family -- all --
to keep them safe from Evil's charm,
which causes Man unending harm."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Tate Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 3:55 PM
Leo, although you wrote it years ago, it has something meaningful in content.
Poteet Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 11:03 PM
Delightful, Leo, You have blessed me today with your poetry. Thanks and have a great evening.
Hamilton Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 8:12 AM
one word "superb" Leo congrats on being featured lovely write hug
Kendrick Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 12:02 PM
Excellent work that you did as a child..Enjoyed reading this one today...The childhood talent follows the man..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 3:07 PM
A lovely glimpse of why your talent shines so brightly now. What an insightful child with an understanding far beyond your years, I am sure.
Squyres Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 2:09 AM
Ahhhh the walls...I know them well. You've captured this idea of building them so well. It's a defense mechanism...is it not? Well done, Enjoyed !!
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June 10, 2011 at 12:55 PM
Gosh, you sure expressed a lot of wisdom in this poem, Leo. Lots of people build walls around themselves and refuse to let others get to know them. I'm taking the walls down so I can have more social interaction, but I understand what you're saying here. Well done! Love, Carolyn
Williams Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 1:50 PM
i really enjoy reading your poetry it is so varied and so full of life. David
Godwyn Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 7:56 AM
Really interesting poetry Leo, i did enjoy it and thanks so much for your heart warming comment on my poetry REFLECTION.Marvel Godwyn
Greenlee Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 9:07 AM
Very nice.Thanks for catching my mistake in my haiku-Sizzle..I fixed it.Have a great day love.Kacey
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May 27, 2011 at 9:18 PM
You sure could have fooled me about it being a childhood poem, Leo. Well done thought generating poem. Pretty sharp.
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May 26, 2011 at 4:37 PM
WOW...this is a very rich poem...the words themselves so lure the reader to keep...reading. enjoyed every second...Love Randa
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