Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Light Verse

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- The Mountain Responds With Echo -

            Hello,
            it's been a long time since the last time I saw you

            Hello,
            do you think I'm talking to myself

            Hello,
            it is good to dream, but even better to realize it

            Hello,
            alone on the mountain, but never lonely

            Hallo,
            to beautiful fjords and waterfalls

            Hallo,
            to a fascinating blend of magnificent scenery

            Hello,
            listen to the silence, drink directly from the mountain streams

            Hello,
            to the sky that changes color, the surroundings become golden

            Hello,
            the world seems just a bit more magical than usual

            I shout hello,
            do you hear that the mountain responds

            ...he ...ll ...Oo ...oooo ...o









16.01.2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
Hello Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One
2nd place in the contest

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Jennifer Proxenos February 10, 2019 at 4:26 AM What a fine win and a terrific poem by a talented poetess! Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2019 at 7:29 AM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Jennifer :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michelle Faulkner January 21, 2019 at 1:51 PM Congratulations on your placement with this fine piece! Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2019 at 2:02 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May January 20, 2019 at 5:06 PM Hello Anne...Congrats on your win.. Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2019 at 2:02 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire January 20, 2019 at 2:37 PM This is wonderfully penned, Sunshine. Don't think I've ever heard an echo. Love your description of the fiords and fresh water from the streams. Congratulations on your win! Anne-Lise Andresen January 21, 2019 at 2:03 PM - Many thanks Carolyn, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith January 20, 2019 at 2:01 PM Congrats on your win Anne-Lise, much enjoyed. :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2019 at 2:03 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy January 20, 2019 at 1:50 PM Anne-Lise CONGRATS on your win. Janice Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2019 at 1:52 PM - Many thanks Janice, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper January 20, 2019 at 1:16 PM Congratulations on your win, Sushine, on Silent One's "Hello" contest! Hugs Eve ~`* Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2019 at 1:52 PM - Many thanks Eve, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May January 20, 2019 at 7:36 AM Congratulations Annie-Lise wonderful poem my friend Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2019 at 1:51 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One January 20, 2019 at 7:01 AM Great take on the contest Sunshine... the mountains always reply.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2019 at 1:50 PM - Thank you for my place on your list of winners, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith January 17, 2019 at 11:28 AM I love your slant on this contest Anne-Lise, best wishes... Anne-Lise Andresen January 18, 2019 at 4:06 AM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser January 17, 2019 at 11:14 AM Very original, great imagery, goo luck in the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen January 18, 2019 at 4:05 AM - Many thanks M.L., for your friendly visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan January 16, 2019 at 6:23 PM Hello Anne-Lise, beautiful little poem, sounds like an echo through the mountains,I can picture it and wish I was there, thank you for sharing Take care.....Vera Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2019 at 5:17 AM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Vera :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands January 16, 2019 at 5:20 PM I can't believe the great poems I am reading tonight. I love this too and love the mountains. Well done! :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2019 at 5:16 AM - Many thanks Heidi, for your friendly visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer January 16, 2019 at 3:55 PM a perfect poem to accompany that picture, anne-lise! nicely done... Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2019 at 5:16 AM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham January 16, 2019 at 2:42 PM No better place to be than be amongst the beauty of nature and alone on a mountain would be the icing on the cake. Nice verse Sunshine. Good luck. Tom. Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2019 at 5:15 AM - We have so much beautiful scenery ... it's about enjoying it :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud January 16, 2019 at 2:36 PM anne, how lovable is this charming write; better than mine... hello and happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2019 at 5:14 AM - I don't think so ... I will never be able to write like you, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit January 16, 2019 at 2:35 PM I hear the echo of poem..hello...nicely done, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2019 at 5:09 AM - Many thanks Vijay, for your friendly visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile January 16, 2019 at 2:22 PM This a lovely take on the theme Anne-Lise. It seems that you are talking to the universe! Happy Wednesday xxoo Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2019 at 5:09 AM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)