The Mother's Loom

Dearest, why cry in vain to the black night 
fight its gentle intent to hold and rest. 
Why fear the loss of light thus malcontent? 
When ego is so false upon the loom. 

Dearest, what makes you think elation found
from harsh light will so frame your hearts delight?
Reality thus formed will not slay fright.
When ego goes so false upon the loom.

Dearest, husks of the Universal eye
soft grays will velveteen the fading light.
Walk on courageous in the Mother's night,
accept the silken comfort of the blur. 

All that is soft and gentle comes from Her.
Dearest Heart, loose yourself upon the loom.


*Dedicated to my friend Robin Gass 
and all those who fear dispersal in the dark.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Arowolo Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 6:28 PM
Well written,Debbie.Congratulations on your win.......Light and love...my dear friend...
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January 31, 2012 at 10:18 PM
Congrats on this beautiful winner!! Blessings, Rhonda
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January 31, 2012 at 5:18 PM
congrats on your win; this has a very 'classical' feel to it, and is beautifully written, very polished :-)
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January 31, 2012 at 3:03 PM
Congratulations, Debbie, on your win! Beautiful words to express a dear friend. Lucky lady to have you as a friend. God bless, Maureen
Brown Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 1:29 PM
Congratulations on your win Debbie. Love, Carol
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January 31, 2012 at 12:41 PM
Congratulations on your win Debbie.
Goff Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 2:11 PM
first thing my family asks when I tell them I have turned-out a new poem "is it dark?" like taking my temperature, they exclaim! if it is...I don't apologize! many sides of me need to air...this poem of yours is awesome art! you are so talented! my friend! (I withdrew my contest poem for further work when the moon is full....) jamesy (oh my! I'm on to an idea!)
Pickett Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 6:41 AM
I am a nocturnal being, like a bat.... When the sun disappears I come to life..... Great visual write my friend... Keep up the good work.... Congrats on the feature.....:JP]
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January 27, 2010 at 4:09 AM
Congratulations Deborah, on having your delightful poem featured this week. It was an enjoyable to read. Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane
Freeman Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 11:27 AM
Congratulations on your feature this week, Sincerely, Moses
Fisher Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
Richards Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 8:39 AM
Oh yes...I remember this poem....that line "reality thus formed will not slay fright" was a powerful, amazing phrase....only you could have done it this well! Congrats on this featured work...such a amazing tribute to dear Robin! ~
Strand Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 8:18 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Debbie Rgds Brian
Sweetheart Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 9:29 PM
Congrats Debbie on your featured poem on the Soup this week... excellent choice... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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January 24, 2010 at 4:53 PM
congrats on the featured poem, good one!!
Fraser Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 2:08 PM
Many congratulations in you deserved featured poem this week, Deborah >> James
Brown Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 1:43 PM
Congratulations are your well deserved featured poem this week Deborah. Love, Carol
Muzzey Avatar
December 27, 2009 at 9:14 AM
Congratulations on being a first round winner and good luck in the semi finals. A very nice write. Caryl
Goff Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 9:35 PM
this fine poem has a blossom of inspiration that allows the reader to wrap themselves in comfort! nice effect! Deb! CONGRATS on reaching the finals with this artistic write! love, jimbo
Brown Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 12:10 PM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Deborah. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 11:58 AM
Yes! Ego, that fearsome spider. Congrats on this selection in the contest. Love, daver
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December 21, 2009 at 10:49 PM
Deb! This is a sensational sonnet. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Love, Lainie
Freeman Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 1:13 PM
Congratulations on your poem going to second round Deb. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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December 21, 2009 at 9:06 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
Strand Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 12:38 AM
Congrats on your first round contest success Debbie.Rgds Brian
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