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Premiere Contest WinnerThe Mother Tree

The Mother Tree

I am the mother tree that spawned the seeds of you.
My children, you've grown and branched away from me.
You've married, left home to start your life anew.
Where e'er you go remember you're my family.

My roots run very deep into the earthly soil.
My centered rings are many, you may not yet view.
They show the story of my years of work and toil
And of growth and wisdom I've tried to share with you.

As you branch out, your little seedlings too will grow.
You'll try to keep them safe under your canopy.
One day when they grow up and leave, you too will know
The painful pangs of missing branches on your tree.

As they return for advice from their mother tree
Remind them to honor God with humility.

6-13-20


~First Place~ Poem of the Day June 15, 2020~
Non Human Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke 
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Singh Avatar
December 21, 2023 at 1:40 AM
Amazingly penned...
Anaya Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 11:50 AM
I'm faving this Connie. Like our Mother earth, it's a gem! Rest in Peace, dear Connie.
Peranteau Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 4:51 PM
Thus the belated mother's day to you dear poet, with regard SILPKA KALITA, your reply to her...i raised several nephews and a niece in my day...the reward iz, the comments they make to us when they are adults...i blush to imagine the reward's Heaven shall bestow. I'm so happy that your children came home. My sister 'here on the soup', iz tackling this az you this very pleasant Friday. (((((claps))))) dear poet, you are on the "Top 100" list; congrats ;) much love, james
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 9:14 AM
I appreciate your comment very much. I am blessed that my children have returned . My oldest daughter is moving back to Hawaii with her two year old for me to enjoy. Thank you James. Blessings xxoo
Peranteau Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 4:59 PM
p2s's...really the intrinsic write...'it' by rights, should have found the pedestal; and what sweeter place to find the pedestal...but here on Poetry Soup!
Kalita Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 5:41 PM
What a feast to the soul write, sublime and indeed being a nature's devotee I can feel the depth of this poem from my very heart. Kindly accept my belated congratulations
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 9:27 PM
Thank you very much Silpika. I wrote this when my last daughter moved away and took my granddaughter with her I had watched from birth. I was missing all my children very much, empty nest type thing. My daughter returned with my granddaughter to live with me after my husband died in July 2020. Blessings xxoo
Kaufman Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 4:34 PM
This one is a gem Connie. I'm busy perusing this site.
Hicks Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 6:13 PM
There is such a reassuring and knowing tone to this poem... one who has experienced the joy of having young, and the pain of letting them go. Now with the wisdom to pass on what you know. Fantastic penning. Also couldn't help but notice the difference of feel with having a 12 syllable line sonnet (I don't think I've tried it, but after reading this, maybe so...)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 10:50 PM
I am so glad I got to share this poem with my husband before he passed away July 29th, 2020. I wrote it because I was really missing my granddaughter. My daughter and granddaughter came to live with us one month before he died which was his fondest wish. The 12 syllable count allows for a more expressive poem Tim. A really belated thank you for your nice comment. I just happened on it tonight. Blessings, Connie xxoo
Mohammed  Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 9:16 PM
This is beautifully written, Connie. A worthy winner. Cheers!
Roper Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 7:54 PM
Lovely imagery, Connie, enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
Tuttle Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Please read some of my poetry, i'd like to know your honest thoughts. Please and thank you, also i enjoyed this poem.
Gauthier Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 8:34 AM
Dear Connie, back to enjoy this delightful poem. It's awesome and very fitting that it should lead the parade of PS poetry in the 2020 PS Anthology. If I didn't FAVE it before I'm doing it now.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 5:38 AM
Thank you so much Line. I am half way through reading the anthology. My eyes can’t handle too much reading or I would be finished by now. It is lovely to be surrounded by so many talented poetry friends in the book. Blessings xxoo
Gondolf Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 6:12 PM
Connie, I was so glad to see this sonnet included in the anthology and read it again, congrats on having it included. Hugs, John
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 10:35 AM
Thank you John. I only sent in this poem and I am delighted they included it in the anthology. I look forward to reading my copy that should arrive Dec. 7th. Congratulations on having your work included as well. Blessings xxoo
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 2:57 PM
this is the one in the book , right? So happy it will be in there.
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 2:57 PM
wouldn't it be great if the book had illustrations too, like the one you have here?
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 5:40 AM
I love this photo I found to go with my poem Andrea. It would be grand but the book would have to be much larger to contain them. Thanks blessings xxoo
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 10:35 PM
Such graceful wisdom, Connie! Your ink splash is mother wit beautiful, as usual. Kudos on POTD. Love and happy holidays.
Watt Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 11:39 PM
Came back to revisit an old fave. This one is simply outstanding, Connie. The tie-in between nature and family are remarkable, and I can tell it's very personal to you. Hugs ~ John
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 2:39 PM
Thank you very much John. This poem is personal for me. I do miss all my children have moved far away. Blessings xxoo
Fleming Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 4:41 PM
I cannot really add much more to what has already been added...enough to say -- truly brilliant!! One of your best poems, Connie...simply takes the breathe away. My thoughts are with you tonight dearest Connie. God bless you always. Your friend. :) john
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 2:49 PM
I am so glad you think this is one of my best poems John as it has much meaning for me. I haven’t been able to write any poetry since the loss of my husband in late July. I hope one day to again feel inspired to write. Thank you very much my friend. Blessings, Connie xxoo
George   Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 5:53 PM
BRILLIANT! SO BEAUTIFUL AND MEANINGFUL AND UPLIFTING. This goes straight to my FAV'S, dear Connie.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 9:00 PM
Thank you very much my friend. This poem is a personal one for me regarding my children. I am honored by your fave. Blessings Connie xxoo
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 4:58 PM
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Radhakrishna Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 5:53 AM
Connie This is superb and fully deserving of number one win and poem of the day!! Brilliant creation! Love it!!
Raven Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 12:33 PM
Hi Connie, belated ongratulations on your win with this truly wonderful poem. Such a beautiful and creative write Connie. Once more, your creativity has no bounds. A fav. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs....Mike. XX
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 1:27 PM
This poem is about missing my children who have grown and moved away and missing them. It is personal for me and I am so glad you like it and that you honored it with a fave. Thank you very much my friend. Blessings xxoo
Schiavina Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 12:56 PM
That's a very beautiful poem. Congratulations.
Gauthier Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 5:32 AM
Awesome poem, Connie. Congrats again on your most deserving win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 12:47 PM
Thank you very much Line. I have my daughter and granddaughter back living with us and I am filled with joy. xxoo
Nyaga Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 9:33 AM
Beautiful poem & Deep too,\\Almighty Bless
Koplin Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 3:11 PM
Such a beautifully written sonnet! It was a pleasure to read.
Bianco Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Hi Connie, excellent poem and a great example of personification. Best Wishes Anthony
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