The Mother of All Planets

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                                           the             universe                    has
                                         physical                                      matter
                                        concentric           sphers                      with
                                       many         planets                                 stars
                                       and                   galaxies                             for
                                      o   b    s     e   r    v  a      t    i      o                 n
                                      text    ual               v     i      e                         w
                                      to             see                   big                      bang
                                      but                    t  o                   me            o u   r
                                      mother                                    e a r t                 h
                                      c     o      u     n    t   s      the      m    o      s        t

                                       f      o            r          i      t '    s           w h  a    t

                                        m                   a                   n                        y  
                                                    
                                         d            o                     c       a       l           l

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Though this is a shape poem
it is written in diminished hexaverse lol
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La France Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 8:22 PM
Thanks for "commenting" on my "poetry" and can I say "wow" this creation is just absolutely "fantastic" it is a masterwork and I am just speechless at your "creativity" ~~
Babcock Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 5:01 PM
I am a astronomy nut so loved this one. God Bless Phyl
Horsman Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 11:18 PM
Wow, what a form/shape, this is Katherine. wonderful stuff. Harry
Roberts Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 7:18 PM
nice one, great presentation
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