The Morning Speaks With Skylarks Singing - Part 1

The Morning Speaks With Skylarks Singing

....inspired by 'Poem in October' by Dylan Thomas



The morning speaks with skylarks singing
o'er the greening meadows and the pliant pasture,
crisp and clear, like God's first measure of
        a holy hymn.
                The air alive with
songs of praise, the gentle winds a sacred message,
the ocean sighing, gulls aloft on wings of prayer.
        His grand prescription,
                like a dream
that streams out from the pillows of the heavens.

I liked to wander by the sea shore,
skipping stones, disobeying laws of gravity.
A sudden shower would see me running
        fancy free,
                between the rain drops,
I cried 'Excelsior!' and set the hills alive;
I skittered, happy as a lamb on shaky legs
        and tumbled freely,
                without care,
'til gasping, I would stop to catch my breath.

The halcyon days of youth came true,
when I would race forever 'neath the tawny sun,
bedaubed in Autumn blood,
        the flame,
                a blend of hues
the likes of which would make a young boy doubly blind,
and lead him into kingdoms where the battlefields
        would blister scarlet,
                happy times
that made me see my childhood clearly.

The weather turned again, and shanties
high atop the hillside loomed like castles drifting
in the sea-blown mist, the noise of boats,
        their nets pulled,
                nudging at the jetty.
From the sand the village was a hazy spectre,
the chapel steeple peeking like Rapunzel's lair,
        her hair a daydream
                falling soft,
O fanciful imagination!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Devonshire Avatar
February 15, 2009 at 12:26 PM
Keith, Dylan Thomas is among my favorites, and now you are as well. So gifted! I live the reference to Rapunzel. Oh, to live like a child in story books! Carolyn
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January 24, 2009 at 5:29 AM
This highlights absolutely everything you are brilliant at. Metaphor, simile, creating scene and evoking feelings. Everything you write is emotive; so much so that I must admit I'm envious. You just keep on getting better and better at everything you do so perfectly already. The shape of this poem adds hugely to it, like a wisp, or silk caught in the wind. Visually matching the unvisual. Amazing! A testiment to everything that makes you great. Nathaniel
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December 9, 2008 at 11:01 AM
Wow, I sat here awhile reflecting on this poem's beauty before commenting, because all the emotion and wonder this poem stirs in me is not easy to put into words! Very, Very, VERY wonderful poem! Thanks so much for the encoragement, and keep writing these magnificent poems!
Gass Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 8:47 PM
This is so beautiful and flows so smoothly. The imagery is wonderful. I so easily lose myself inside your words. Thank you for sharing them and for all your kindness. Now to Pt. 2. Love, Robin
Reynolds Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 6:08 PM
may I be redundant, and say that this, is brilliant? The whole poem moves, as the wind (my favorite!), the word placement is perfect, as is the word choices...I mean come on, I liked to wander by the sea shore, skipping stones, disobeying laws of gravity. That, is awesome. This poem (and I really have not said this to anyone here) made me misty, as it touched some unseen part of me that likes to stay untouched. Beautiful, beautiful...off to read PII, love Kristin
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