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The Morning Pigeons

the rising sun knits the brown and white pigeons inside the blue eyes __________________________ 17/3/2018

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Date: 4/17/2018 10:39:00 PM
Ingenious snapshot! The eyes have it! (as they say) -- courtesy of the sun. Very nice write, Probir. Best wishes, Gershon
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/18/2018 8:40:00 PM
Yes ... I had actually seen the windows a little before writing the haiku ... Thank you ...
Date: 4/17/2018 3:58:00 AM
- A pretty picture, Probir - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/18/2018 8:43:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine ...

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