the morning lifts
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a solitary willow weeps
a babbling brook nearby
deer and fawn present a peaceful scene
the sun begins to glisten
on the dewy grass
field mice run through the meadow
rabbits play hide and seek
bluebirds perched above
on a white pine branch
sudden gunshot echoes
everyone scatters
first day of hunting season
AP: Honorable Mention 2025, Front Page Pick 2024
Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2024
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