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The Moon Is a Mirror

When the moon is full it is my mirror I wantonly look for your reflection Clouded thoughts pass by, you become nearer Stars enhancing your welcomed reception Intent on gaining deeper perception Envisioning you looking back at me The moon brightens to avoid deception Mentally traveling so cheerfully Arriving to a place so peacefully Serenaded by the soothing night sounds I catch a soft kiss you throw lovingly No sweeter kisses can ever be found When the moon is full it is my mirror My destiny has never been clearer An original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

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Tamara Simic

Date: 3/7/2016 2:58:00 PM

Nice one :) I love the moon more than I love the sun ;)

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/7/2016 3:06:00 PM

Thank you, Tamara. I appreciate the flowers:) The reason is because the sun is not as romantic as the moon. I can't recall the moon putting off oppressive heat except for when someone is in my arms. LOL

Susan Palli

Date: 3/5/2016 7:32:00 AM

Love it!

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/5/2016 7:37:00 AM

Thank you, Susan for the kind encouraging and supportive remarks. Your kindness is overwhelming. Peace my friend:)

Constance La France

Date: 3/4/2016 11:23:00 PM

Daniel, I think you did a great job, I am no expert on meter, just learning it myself, I wrote down how you did this sonnet because I want to try one, well poemdog, you did wonderful and I am loving this 7 ~

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/4/2016 11:30:00 PM

Thank you, BW. I appreciate the kindness and the 7. I also have another example where I tried again. "Thank You Vincent Van Gogh". You can use it for a reference also. Good luck and have fun. Peace my dear:)

Jeannie Cronin

Date: 3/3/2016 11:29:00 PM

Another beautiful gem in your long list of crowning achievements. I just love reading your work Daniel.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/4/2016 6:21:00 AM

Many thanks my dear. I just love your visits. you say such flattering things. I am touched by your amity. Peace to you dear Jeannie:)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/3/2016 8:34:00 PM

Love the poem, Daniel, I have always been mesmerized with the moon.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/3/2016 8:42:00 PM

Thank you, Vie. Isn't it so mysteriously romantic? I really appreciate you identifying with my poem. Your visits are always so uplifting. Thank you my dear friend:)