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The Moon Is a Mirror

When the moon is full it is my mirror
I wantonly look for your reflection
Clouded thoughts pass by, you become nearer
Stars enhancing your welcomed reception
Intent on gaining deeper perception
Envisioning you looking back at me
The moon brightens to avoid deception
Mentally traveling so cheerfully
Arriving to a place so peacefully
Serenaded by the soothing night sounds
I catch a soft kiss you throw lovingly
No sweeter kisses can ever be found
When the moon is full it is my mirror
My destiny has never been clearer



    An original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

Copyright © Daniel Turner | Year Posted 2016

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Tamara Simic Date: 3/7/2016 2:58:00 PM Nice one :) I love the moon more than I love the sun ;) Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 3/7/2016 3:06:00 PM Thank you, Tamara. I appreciate the flowers:) The reason is because the sun is not as romantic as the moon. I can't recall the moon putting off oppressive heat except for when someone is in my arms. LOL

Susan Palli Date: 3/5/2016 7:32:00 AM Love it! Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 3/5/2016 7:37:00 AM Thank you, Susan for the kind encouraging and supportive remarks. Your kindness is overwhelming. Peace my friend:)

Constance La France Date: 3/4/2016 11:23:00 PM Daniel, I think you did a great job, I am no expert on meter, just learning it myself, I wrote down how you did this sonnet because I want to try one, well poemdog, you did wonderful and I am loving this 7 ~ Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 3/4/2016 11:30:00 PM Thank you, BW. I appreciate the kindness and the 7. I also have another example where I tried again. "Thank You Vincent Van Gogh". You can use it for a reference also. Good luck and have fun. Peace my dear:)

Jeannie Cronin Date: 3/3/2016 11:29:00 PM Another beautiful gem in your long list of crowning achievements. I just love reading your work Daniel. Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 3/4/2016 6:21:00 AM Many thanks my dear. I just love your visits. you say such flattering things. I am touched by your amity. Peace to you dear Jeannie:)

Eve Roper Date: 3/3/2016 8:34:00 PM Love the poem, Daniel, I have always been mesmerized with the moon. Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 3/3/2016 8:42:00 PM Thank you, Vie. Isn't it so mysteriously romantic? I really appreciate you identifying with my poem. Your visits are always so uplifting. Thank you my dear friend:)