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The Moon and the Stars

The stars were twinkling as the moon danced sending beaming rays to float over the earth. Casting shadows over all in the still of the night. We lay entwined fingers wandering southwards. Our breath hot and passionate as we danced the age old dance. Reaffirming our love as slowly we rose to climax. By the river reflecting the majesty of the sky. Adding poignancy to our deep abiding love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/30/2016 8:10:00 AM
Yes, I try to gaze at them every night weather permitting. Great inspiration comes from above also. Beautiful words. /|\
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Date: 7/29/2015 5:33:00 PM
A lovely and excellence write......A.M.
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Date: 7/30/2015 4:57:00 AM
ty A.M hugs
Date: 7/29/2015 5:09:00 PM
beautiful romantic write, my friend
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Date: 7/30/2015 4:56:00 AM
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Date: 7/28/2015 1:48:00 PM
- Shadow, sounds so peaceful, romantic and perfect - A beautiful image which gives a special atmosphere (7!!) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/28/2015 3:18:00 PM
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Date: 7/28/2015 12:31:00 PM
Shadow, beautifully penned romantic write , 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Date: 7/28/2015 3:17:00 PM
ty Connie hugs
Date: 7/28/2015 8:36:00 AM
Beautiful night under the stars shadow! Thank you for visiting my poems~ lee
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Date: 7/28/2015 3:16:00 PM
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Date: 7/28/2015 1:44:00 AM
I love the romantic imagery that this poem displays Shadow. I agree with Andrea, it is one of your best!
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Date: 7/28/2015 3:15:00 PM
ty Connie really appreciated hugs
Date: 7/27/2015 7:06:00 PM
gosh, you don't often do romantic type poems, do you, Shadow. This is one of your best I'd say. I love it!!
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Date: 7/27/2015 7:18:00 PM
well it is coming up the time of year that I lost Pat I usually do a couple in his memory Andrea glad you like it hugs
Date: 7/27/2015 2:47:00 PM
Yes, those reflections on the river. Why is it it is always more erotic outdoors? Good images and mystery. Love, daver
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Date: 7/27/2015 2:56:00 PM
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Date: 7/27/2015 10:43:00 AM
ohh, gentle and sultry notes pulsate through your beautiful piece, shadow.. huggs
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Date: 7/27/2015 10:44:00 AM
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Date: 7/27/2015 9:34:00 AM
Shadow, passionate write duet with beautiful imagery.. =')!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 7/27/2015 10:41:00 AM
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Date: 7/27/2015 7:29:00 AM
wow wonderful emotions and passions rising here Shadow - fabulous imagery a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/27/2015 8:12:00 AM
ty Jan much appreciated
Date: 7/27/2015 7:29:00 AM
Beautiful and sensual at the same time.
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Date: 7/27/2015 8:11:00 AM
ty Elizabeth hugs

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