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The Moon and Back Love

Howling lamenting 
staring into her white gem
pearl ivory face 
Happiness one pure virtue 
dripping starlight tears over






A dream of great beauty

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Andrea Dietrich

November 8, 2014 at 11:54 PM

oohhh, I love that line dripping starlight tears... So PRETTY!!

Liam Mcdaid

November 9, 2014 at 8:09 AM

it came to me in tear drops misting the eyes thinking of a star holding my dreams wonderful comment andrea thank you so kindly for the truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated pal

Eileen Manassian

November 8, 2014 at 8:09 PM

Liam....I've read every single one of your poems. I haven't posted comments for a while...I don't know. I don't feel so well. Thank you for your visits to my work...and know that I am a fan of your beautiful poetry. Be sure of that...even if you don't hear from me. Hugs

Liam Mcdaid

November 9, 2014 at 3:36 AM

you are always so kind eileen i noticed you've not been about i hope and pray you get well soon dear friend thank you for your kind words have a blessed beautiful sunday with a smile

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 8, 2014 at 3:03 PM

- A beautiful dream of great beauty, Liam !- oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

November 9, 2014 at 3:32 AM

it sure is anne lise wonderful comment dear friend have a blessed beautiful sunday thank you pal

M. L. Kiser

November 8, 2014 at 2:44 PM

A well written tanka; so much in such a small package.

Liam Mcdaid

November 9, 2014 at 3:29 AM

thank you dear friend for such a wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Dorian Petersen Potter

November 8, 2014 at 10:04 AM

The moon and back love, a very beautiful haiku Liam... Dripping starlight tears over, now that's so very dazzling and beautiful to me, my dear friend Liam.The moon and love can do many things to us. Take good care now. Love and hugs! :) xx xx D.

Liam Mcdaid

November 9, 2014 at 3:14 AM

thank you dorian truly very beautiful comment dear friend you also take care deeply appreciated