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The Moment When

"the moment when" tis not the reason why or even the moment when our glances first met and we uttered half words nor was it the initial kiss when taking my hand drawing me near or the call to say you were home telling me tenderly good night twas that one fine day with a playful note somehow my teasing words sparked in you leading us to the timing all was true I came home to a sign from sun and moon the returned note of play was one heartbeat such a light and rush will live forever strong it's safely in my box of our private treasures it was that moment when I knew I loved you SkyWatcher - 03-28-17

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Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 3/28/2017 5:27:00 PM

Thank you for sharing that moment in time with us Lisa, even if it is fictitious. Its beauty and magic are by no means diminished because of the power and sincerity of your words:)7 Amitiés

Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/29/2017 4:51:00 AM

Good Morning Anne-Marie. It is I who thanks you. Yes, the words are sincere as I am sincere when I say I truly am honored. I enjoy entries of romance. Have a beautiful morning.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/28/2017 1:27:00 PM

Delightful write Lisa, I love your delivery and the idea xomo!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/28/2017 1:38:00 PM

Hello Maureen. Good Afternoon. So nice to see you. Thank you so much for this fabulous and generous review. Honestly. I'm pleased you liked the entry. Have a wonderful afternoon.

Chris Green

Date: 3/28/2017 10:09:00 AM

There is always that moment when we know, when that spark becomes a flame, when admiration becomes adoration and it feels so good when it happens. I love the note kept in the box of private memories because sometimes those moments become faint and we'd really like to never forget, regardless of the outcome. Very nicely written and expressed Lisa.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/28/2017 10:20:00 AM

top of the day to you Chris. Hi. Thank you Thank you. I hope the concept worked. As always, your commentary and intake are so generous. May love never be forgotten for him or for her. And yes that moment is magical. Have a wonderful afternoon.