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The Moment Her Eyes

the moment her eyes elusive yet the sea sees her within, such vast oceans her thoughts told by a thousand and quell not her active mind release the tsunami release her eyes

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Date: 3/13/2024 5:24:00 PM
I love how you used 'tsunami'--the tsunami of thoughts in her mind. Wow, liked it. have a great evening, Sara
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 3/14/2024 12:37:00 AM
yes exactly that, so full and passioante with thoughts and ideas her eyes are so alive, thanks Sara
Date: 3/13/2024 9:00:00 AM
Are they mesmerizing to the point of distraction, Clive?
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 3/13/2024 9:06:00 AM
always ;) and so full of the world

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