The Moment Her Eyes

the moment her eyes
   elusive 
yet the sea sees her
within, 
such vast
oceans her thoughts
told by a thousand
and quell not
   her active mind
release 
   the tsunami
release
   her eyes
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Lane Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 9:00 AM
Are they mesmerizing to the point of distraction, Clive?
Culverhouse Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 9:06 AM
always ;) and so full of the world
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