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a mockingjay denigrates others ~ those who sing more beautifully
~ with caring thoughts for Deb M

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 5/8/2023 10:41:00 PM
Thankyou lovely Lin your support and kindness is truly treasured! Debx
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/9/2023 4:48:00 AM
You're so very welcome, Deb. We are flowers who sometimes need a little TLC to keep us blooming.
Date: 5/8/2023 6:37:00 PM
Hi Lin, Your monku is so true. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Date: 5/8/2023 6:50:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis and I hope the same for you.
Date: 5/8/2023 1:38:00 PM
Lin, a great monoku, they sadly mock others from jealousy and for negative attention!
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Date: 5/8/2023 6:50:00 PM
I am in complete agreement, Tania. I wonder if they migrate somewhere else for the summer. Thanks for being such a wonderful friend.
Date: 5/8/2023 10:19:00 AM
That is so true Lin, and we know who sings more beautifully. Tom
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Date: 5/8/2023 10:47:00 AM
A voice that whispers graciously and gratefully is heard over one that screeches like an owl and wails like a banshee. Thank you ever so much, Tom.
Date: 5/8/2023 7:30:00 AM
... we are within the same thoughts today, Lin :) - Great written :) - hugs
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Date: 5/8/2023 7:45:00 AM
We certainly are, Anne-Lise. Thanks for being such a great friend.
Date: 5/8/2023 5:23:00 AM
Ain’t that the truth Lin, a sad situation that goes on quite a bit, if they cannot equal you, they try disparaging, but in the end most people will make up their own mind, who the real soprano is, another excellent Monoku with real meaning, cheers David
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/8/2023 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, David. Unfortunately, they tweet out of tune. I sang in choir for years, but never loud enough for my voice to usurp those who carried the melody far better.
Date: 5/8/2023 4:55:00 AM
Seems to be an abundance of them. Great monoku, Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/8/2023 5:04:00 AM
Good morning, Danny. Thank you for your return, even if long enough to share your thoughts. Missing you here.

Book: Shattered Sighs